tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post2242448490476347825..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: BrokenSumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-58496411229986321552014-11-04T20:29:51.940-08:002014-11-04T20:29:51.940-08:00Lovely words and images, Sumana.Lovely words and images, Sumana.Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-31026149098602953052014-11-01T18:51:31.673-07:002014-11-01T18:51:31.673-07:00Nice !Nice !rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-61643963485962342802014-11-01T10:32:01.685-07:002014-11-01T10:32:01.685-07:00What a beautiful image of humanity you have painte...What a beautiful image of humanity you have painted in your poetry here Sumana.Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-68598044624889547272014-10-30T18:33:28.075-07:002014-10-30T18:33:28.075-07:00I love the mood you've created here ...I love the mood you've created here ...Susan Lindquisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04039551683129884367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-86385774038887694362014-10-30T15:42:30.814-07:002014-10-30T15:42:30.814-07:00I admire the imagery of creating that beautiful pe...I admire the imagery of creating that beautiful pearl, a twine of love ~ Lovely share Sumana ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-71602095738027752322014-10-30T14:53:14.544-07:002014-10-30T14:53:14.544-07:00Such lovely imagery in your poem! A beautiful res...Such lovely imagery in your poem! A beautiful response to the prompt.Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-65510787970395698732014-10-30T13:04:33.579-07:002014-10-30T13:04:33.579-07:00each memory as a pearl...that's beautiful!each memory as a pearl...that's beautiful!Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-55236925081749613172014-10-30T07:17:29.277-07:002014-10-30T07:17:29.277-07:00Such a lyrical poem.Such a lyrical poem.elaine https://www.blogger.com/profile/17075935631756457901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-9894433133561639532014-10-30T07:11:09.306-07:002014-10-30T07:11:09.306-07:00Well done, Sumana. I really like "twine of lo...Well done, Sumana. I really like "twine of love" and the line "Building up takes a lifetime". It seems like this poem is saying that the fruits of love do not happen overnight but instead take much work and dedication. I fully agree.Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-61490968647995458182014-10-30T05:11:41.170-07:002014-10-30T05:11:41.170-07:00If it keeps memories alive that is a great thing t...If it keeps memories alive that is a great thing to have. More so the aesthetic value it carries. Great lines Sumana!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-7794231845340425882014-10-30T04:15:50.347-07:002014-10-30T04:15:50.347-07:00iridescent pearl drops - What a magical opening li...iridescent pearl drops - What a magical opening line, the wonder of such a beautiful simple thing. This was quite beautiful.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-76893602161763181362014-10-30T01:28:01.077-07:002014-10-30T01:28:01.077-07:00'building up takes a lifetime not breaking'...'building up takes a lifetime not breaking' loved this line and the whole poem, beautiful<br /><br /><a href="http://cifarshayar.blogspot.com/2014/10/woolen-socks.html" rel="nofollow">Woolen Socks</a>Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-30561682070255021162014-10-29T21:40:50.630-07:002014-10-29T21:40:50.630-07:00I'd like to think that after roughing it throu...I'd like to think that after roughing it through, we can become priceless and polished, it all makes sense, to me, or else's was was it all about really<br /><br />Much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-11035962232455780382014-10-29T17:40:09.604-07:002014-10-29T17:40:09.604-07:00"iridescent memories Remain forever" - w..."iridescent memories Remain forever" - what a lovely thought. Special memories do take on a kind of luminescent glow, don't they.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-16950840935020483552014-10-29T16:58:19.038-07:002014-10-29T16:58:19.038-07:00Sumana,
I hate that time when a string of pearls ...Sumana,<br /><br />I hate that time when a string of pearls or beads snaps, and rolls away...Never quite the same when eventually restrung!! But, it is the memories from times when the pearls were worn, that counts!!!<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-86863402361446608772014-10-29T11:45:31.171-07:002014-10-29T11:45:31.171-07:00Yes those iridescent memories are treasures indeed...Yes those iridescent memories are treasures indeed.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-10617022922993252432014-10-29T10:34:34.061-07:002014-10-29T10:34:34.061-07:00Beautiful, Sumana!Beautiful, Sumana!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-66053355289144799402014-10-29T05:37:20.958-07:002014-10-29T05:37:20.958-07:00They do indeed! A lovely poem.
www.keithsrambling...They do indeed! A lovely poem.<br /><br />www.keithsramblings.comKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-53689041678369174122014-10-29T05:33:42.588-07:002014-10-29T05:33:42.588-07:00My thoughts will go to this the next time I wear m...My thoughts will go to this the next time I wear my pearls.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-50812900781963641592014-10-29T03:34:22.570-07:002014-10-29T03:34:22.570-07:00Iridescent dreams do last forever, I'd like to...Iridescent dreams do last forever, I'd like to think they do.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-84526060376902125392014-10-28T22:39:54.474-07:002014-10-28T22:39:54.474-07:00Such beautiful lines: "Labored hard
To string...Such beautiful lines: "Labored hard<br />To string each dream piece<br />Building up takes a life time<br />Not breaking"Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-18395605062784053542014-10-28T20:03:26.895-07:002014-10-28T20:03:26.895-07:00Some say pearls are formed out of the tears of mer...Some say pearls are formed out of the tears of mermaids, from being broken to a thing of beauty.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-75482666366592201462014-10-28T19:59:56.838-07:002014-10-28T19:59:56.838-07:00I do like the idea that iridescent memories last f...I do like the idea that iridescent memories last forever. I think that each pearl carries its heritage with it.. Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-14248099457204448582014-10-28T19:58:46.918-07:002014-10-28T19:58:46.918-07:00those memories do...and the shaping of a pearl...m...those memories do...and the shaping of a pearl...much like the making of a diamond makes for an interesting process...neither gentle...and the pearl begins as a grain of sand...irritating....and then layeredBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com