tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post2555968468930373767..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: The Birds!Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-49958818386751516502016-01-30T09:05:41.981-08:002016-01-30T09:05:41.981-08:00Asphalt
humans..
road
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prey
road kill
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...Asphalt<br />humans..<br />road<br />play<br />prey<br />road kill<br />spells <br />hU<br />man <br />dooms...Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-939137024907933972016-01-29T16:33:44.010-08:002016-01-29T16:33:44.010-08:00Wonderfully captured, my friend.Wonderfully captured, my friend.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-557037726423992522016-01-29T11:23:52.087-08:002016-01-29T11:23:52.087-08:00This really captures the images of the crows and s...This really captures the images of the crows and suggests a kind of mourning and fellowship. Beutifully crafted.Georginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01463869349871241765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-27914680870503731102016-01-29T11:16:26.236-08:002016-01-29T11:16:26.236-08:00Stark reality painted in this one, Sumana. Life, a...Stark reality painted in this one, Sumana. Life, all life, is so fragile.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-72509841110150320302016-01-29T11:02:48.665-08:002016-01-29T11:02:48.665-08:00Eerie but dignified as they pay their respect to t...Eerie but dignified as they pay their respect to their fallen friend. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-32662781011223526512016-01-29T08:59:45.069-08:002016-01-29T08:59:45.069-08:00Terrific imagery, & fine use of the form; some...Terrific imagery, & fine use of the form; some dark thoughts metaphorically, but keeps us reading. I always like crows as subjects for poetics. They can mimic speech, have had them talk to me, which can be unnerving.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-38331518110436028742016-01-29T08:35:44.269-08:002016-01-29T08:35:44.269-08:00Hundreds of black crows in mourning--an ominous si...Hundreds of black crows in mourning--an ominous sight, indeed. Well done.vb holmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18042714310345407971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-10013808178587023352016-01-29T07:51:10.654-08:002016-01-29T07:51:10.654-08:00A gathering of crows IS called a "murder,&quo...A gathering of crows IS called a "murder," after all... ;) <br />You have gracefully echoed WCW's "Wheelbarrow" cadence with this, right down to the use of prepositional phrase, which I enjoyed very much. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-39417807407431725922016-01-29T06:39:51.794-08:002016-01-29T06:39:51.794-08:00Oh, this is sad really. I hate to think of such a...Oh, this is sad really. I hate to think of such a painful death, even if it IS a crow.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-70201892498293886492016-01-29T06:17:33.233-08:002016-01-29T06:17:33.233-08:00I have to say murder, though I shouldn't use a...I have to say murder, though I shouldn't use a pun like this for a serious poem.. love the dark tone.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-89403318581900527282016-01-29T05:56:04.012-08:002016-01-29T05:56:04.012-08:00Tough lifeTough lifemagiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-54045795980324714622016-01-29T05:50:51.249-08:002016-01-29T05:50:51.249-08:00....ends very darkly...Can clearly see this in my .......ends very darkly...Can clearly see this in my minds' eye, without the photo. And that is the mark of imagism....well done.lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-66512632184538642512016-01-29T04:24:30.144-08:002016-01-29T04:24:30.144-08:00Poetry for/about birds...they provide much to writ...Poetry for/about birds...they provide much to write about. You have it exactly right, in every line, how the crows behave. Then with the last line you put it all together..what a precarious life they lead, the dangers they face.Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.com