tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post2851018915615381430..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-52739811011560651572014-05-09T09:06:11.507-07:002014-05-09T09:06:11.507-07:00The immediate senses seem to work fine, but oh, wh...The immediate senses seem to work fine, but oh, what a heartbreak of an ending! Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-86245016168237439592014-04-27T03:45:01.355-07:002014-04-27T03:45:01.355-07:00So subtle and so powerful. So subtle and so powerful. Mimi Foxmortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13572725659728049534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-49319626240368655582014-04-26T05:57:20.194-07:002014-04-26T05:57:20.194-07:00Wonderful opening especially--the moths, the dread...Wonderful opening especially--the moths, the dreadlocks like banyons I found especially evocative. Thanks. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-51028212137249212532014-04-26T03:46:27.069-07:002014-04-26T03:46:27.069-07:00The last line is just perfect. Captures the mood, ...The last line is just perfect. Captures the mood, the despair, the hopelessness.Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-11819926724493800622014-04-25T22:31:17.706-07:002014-04-25T22:31:17.706-07:00sad evocation ~sad evocation ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-38931235188447943732014-04-25T20:59:06.830-07:002014-04-25T20:59:06.830-07:00A child needs love to grow and flourishA child needs love to grow and flourishVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-80557224802100914002014-04-25T20:44:30.084-07:002014-04-25T20:44:30.084-07:00Heartbreaking a child wouldn't know the meanin...Heartbreaking a child wouldn't know the meaning of mother...powerfulSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-9392298002424805592014-04-25T16:15:03.210-07:002014-04-25T16:15:03.210-07:00Profound and compelling.Profound and compelling.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-43818969138927397742014-04-25T13:48:22.250-07:002014-04-25T13:48:22.250-07:00Very very understated and cool. ouch.Very very understated and cool. ouch.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-60229007614386703102014-04-25T11:37:24.598-07:002014-04-25T11:37:24.598-07:00This is perfectly unnerving in it's sadness. ...This is perfectly unnerving in it's sadness. Wonderfully written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-4259203575838171582014-04-25T10:16:16.800-07:002014-04-25T10:16:16.800-07:00I wondered where you were going with this, but in ...I wondered where you were going with this, but in the end it made perfect, and I mean perfect, sense! This is brilliant!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-67178776435798929952014-04-25T09:30:13.180-07:002014-04-25T09:30:13.180-07:00Oh my goodness, you have so totally nailed this pr...Oh my goodness, you have so totally nailed this prompt! This is just perfect. The tearful mother, the blank, unknowing stare.........brilliant!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-39200602543658487422014-04-25T07:46:59.518-07:002014-04-25T07:46:59.518-07:00So visually evocative!So visually evocative!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-23859783146964688722014-04-25T05:59:54.300-07:002014-04-25T05:59:54.300-07:00Sad to think that a child might not know the answe...Sad to think that a child might not know the answer to that question...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com