tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post3096207004842180311..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-69604546475126996222014-06-22T08:40:42.259-07:002014-06-22T08:40:42.259-07:00Lovely set of closing ideas, and nice tangerine im...Lovely set of closing ideas, and nice tangerine image!PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-13397586746468014032014-06-19T06:11:47.808-07:002014-06-19T06:11:47.808-07:00Yes, it is good to nurture a me-space in the heart...Yes, it is good to nurture a me-space in the heart. :-) It provides solace.<br /><br />Lovely writing here. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-46003183124015397302014-06-19T03:45:26.806-07:002014-06-19T03:45:26.806-07:00into Africa where the heart can roam wild and free...into Africa where the heart can roam wild and free..favorite line<br />Where tree-dreams blossom to take their wings..may dreams always blossom. Small places are nice too much can be learned..enjoyed your poem..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-16068689927693245632014-06-18T20:19:27.512-07:002014-06-18T20:19:27.512-07:00I agree with Susan and the poem was lovely with th...I agree with Susan and the poem was lovely with the falling refrains - not quite a villanelle, but interesting. Liked it a lot!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-80381526030478461232014-06-18T13:07:38.050-07:002014-06-18T13:07:38.050-07:00When we carry that space we will never be lost, no...When we carry that space we will never be lost, no matter how much we risk getting close to small things rather than take a distant view from the boundary of foreignness and familiarity. Beautifully measured piece.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-56673677421764904722014-06-18T10:14:26.749-07:002014-06-18T10:14:26.749-07:00loved the repetion in this piece. Africa would ce...loved the repetion in this piece. Africa would certainly be an interesting place to see!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-25322360258535126202014-06-18T09:41:31.611-07:002014-06-18T09:41:31.611-07:00That "me-place" in my heart--that's ...That "me-place" in my heart--that's what I was aiming for in mine. Wherever we are is the best. You nailed it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-27527708737891574592014-06-18T09:39:11.498-07:002014-06-18T09:39:11.498-07:00Lovely! The repetition is very nice, and I love &q...Lovely! The repetition is very nice, and I love "tree-dreams"!Jenny Hernerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15884658886582080587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-22263655823988252622014-06-18T09:07:39.362-07:002014-06-18T09:07:39.362-07:00you make is sound so niceyou make is sound so niceWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-5349510931871389572014-06-18T08:27:14.793-07:002014-06-18T08:27:14.793-07:00nurturing that me-space is important - and i would...nurturing that me-space is important - and i would love to go to africa one day... have some invitations to south africa - so maybe that trip is not too far away...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-25661106688131848302014-06-18T08:11:55.323-07:002014-06-18T08:11:55.323-07:00I dream of Africa, like I dream of Scotland; your ...I dream of Africa, like I dream of Scotland; your poetic perspective, starting within, reducing the start of the journey to the level of atoms, or inner reserves, is very creative; nice job with the prompt. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-24019810547809942252014-06-18T07:06:11.564-07:002014-06-18T07:06:11.564-07:00You've done something lovely (and difficult) w...You've done something lovely (and difficult) with the form here--the dreamlike repetition--and given us beautiful visuals.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13151381250841886227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-82042157050561836252014-06-18T07:04:48.373-07:002014-06-18T07:04:48.373-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13151381250841886227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-20174454279366583212014-06-18T01:15:08.265-07:002014-06-18T01:15:08.265-07:00I thought I'd already posted this comment, Sum...I thought I'd already posted this comment, Sumana, but here it is again with apologies if you got it before...<br />I like the sinking tangerine ray but love the Baobabs beckoning - lovely words about a wonderful place.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-22977739132107778692014-06-18T01:04:26.615-07:002014-06-18T01:04:26.615-07:00Ah Africa with all its mysteries beckon me to thei...Ah Africa with all its mysteries beckon me to their world of unknown too. Beautiful. Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-36494326702982844452014-06-17T21:59:58.902-07:002014-06-17T21:59:58.902-07:00Wow--I like this!Wow--I like this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-44583588103587915072014-06-17T21:24:28.703-07:002014-06-17T21:24:28.703-07:00in the tinest atoms, the smallest of volumes, yet ...in the tinest atoms, the smallest of volumes, yet it consists of almost all empty space. Perhaps that's where love resides.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-42626715889113235842014-06-17T20:58:54.555-07:002014-06-17T20:58:54.555-07:00A space like that sounds wonderful - I have never ...A space like that sounds wonderful - I have never visited Africa but I think I would prefer places where nature is big and I can see more stars than people.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-47923061169114900892014-06-17T19:34:02.774-07:002014-06-17T19:34:02.774-07:00Africa with all the mysteries and unique happening...Africa with all the mysteries and unique happenings. Somehow it may be the playground of the famous and rich with lots of spare cash. Otherwise discoveries are just waiting for others to know better! Great write Sumana!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-36221163380854780342014-06-17T17:33:46.108-07:002014-06-17T17:33:46.108-07:00smiles...sounds lovely...and i love small spaces t...smiles...sounds lovely...and i love small spaces too...i like to find the small places only the locals know...untouched by all the tourists....africa...i will meet her for the first time in october...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-69300630717476439392014-06-17T17:32:25.756-07:002014-06-17T17:32:25.756-07:00oh, Africa looks lovely, and your poem brought som...oh, Africa looks lovely, and your poem brought some great scenery to life... especially liked, <br /><br />Baobabs beside the Zambezi beckon... Baobabs are amazing treesAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.com