tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post333402841872703516..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-9549578210379332472014-05-13T12:35:30.816-07:002014-05-13T12:35:30.816-07:00For me, your closing is especially powerful. Well ...For me, your closing is especially powerful. Well written!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-28886171522482266292014-05-12T18:30:37.024-07:002014-05-12T18:30:37.024-07:00very mysterious and brooding, a creatively hauntin...very mysterious and brooding, a creatively haunting piece to decipher. good job!!! Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-43905033132749190552014-05-12T05:59:20.285-07:002014-05-12T05:59:20.285-07:00a fine job at getting below the surface. The poem ...a fine job at getting below the surface. The poem makes the reader uncomfortable which is just right for the subject matterAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-59861583055525047142014-05-11T22:13:06.266-07:002014-05-11T22:13:06.266-07:00A dark, pointed finger....Wonderful piece!!A dark, pointed finger....Wonderful piece!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-7672593312933155262014-05-11T20:24:40.653-07:002014-05-11T20:24:40.653-07:00This is not someone (or the feelings that go with ...This is not someone (or the feelings that go with it) I would want to encounter. Passionately penned!TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-29358727785826440272014-05-11T17:52:32.958-07:002014-05-11T17:52:32.958-07:00yikes...you set a rather menacing tone...and i am ...yikes...you set a rather menacing tone...and i am a bit scared of what happens when mother nature strikes back...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-73391903356584692142014-05-11T15:46:07.585-07:002014-05-11T15:46:07.585-07:00Some really effective images here. "your wra...Some really effective images here. "your wrath scorches" - very visceral . . . the complexity of the ache laid bare. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-26537994932483527322014-05-11T14:15:21.563-07:002014-05-11T14:15:21.563-07:00The poem and image go so well together, a deeply s...The poem and image go so well together, a deeply stirring write<br /><br />Thanks for stopping over at my blog<br /><br />Much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-37817874594853886312014-05-11T13:11:01.665-07:002014-05-11T13:11:01.665-07:00Mysterious and a bit frightening! Well done! ♥Mysterious and a bit frightening! Well done! ♥Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-39573719281131446742014-05-11T12:40:44.715-07:002014-05-11T12:40:44.715-07:00Like this Sumana, powerful images here.Like this Sumana, powerful images here.ScottlBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09147326078011352857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-9014537459635313182014-05-11T12:07:14.933-07:002014-05-11T12:07:14.933-07:00Yikes! excellent... will she ever forgive us? Can ...Yikes! excellent... will she ever forgive us? Can we atone?<br />ZQ ZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-87113870922660755402014-05-11T11:15:52.313-07:002014-05-11T11:15:52.313-07:00Ha, I almost wrote a poem about Mother Earth this ...Ha, I almost wrote a poem about Mother Earth this morning, then my thoughts took another direction. The image of her wounds oozing blood is powerful.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-41542369962525388112014-05-11T10:26:48.085-07:002014-05-11T10:26:48.085-07:00This is a powerful invocation of the Earth Mother....This is a powerful invocation of the Earth Mother.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-72595113032751417712014-05-11T09:34:19.877-07:002014-05-11T09:34:19.877-07:00I found that third stanza especially good. Whew-t...I found that third stanza especially good. Whew-that artwork is chilling!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-5854956360964475222014-05-11T07:10:08.628-07:002014-05-11T07:10:08.628-07:00I still love this poem--I wonder where yesterday&#...I still love this poem--I wonder where yesterday's comment went? If I had entered it when I wrote it ... and that is only a weak example of how omission brings us to the brink of hell, and ultimately a place where we do not plea for rescue. Oh, Gaea! Your death is its own revenge. Your poem and the sculpture could have been conceived together.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-52934667486544250952014-05-11T06:31:47.139-07:002014-05-11T06:31:47.139-07:00You managed to make it truly spooky as well as tou...You managed to make it truly spooky as well as touched by strong emotion.avalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051456576217305095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-83991232967515692732014-05-11T05:18:32.481-07:002014-05-11T05:18:32.481-07:00You captured her expression with abyss-eyes and yo...You captured her expression with abyss-eyes and your heart's a desert ~ Such a wrath she has brought upon us ~<br /><br />Thanks for linking up with Real Toads & wishing you Happy Weekend ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-9548831345635092172014-05-11T05:13:40.903-07:002014-05-11T05:13:40.903-07:00The last stanza is a sad testament to where we are...The last stanza is a sad testament to where we are today...Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-74262950304870309642014-05-11T02:19:40.934-07:002014-05-11T02:19:40.934-07:00oh heck... the abyss-eyes .... the heart a desert....oh heck... the abyss-eyes .... the heart a desert... surely i wouldn't want to get too close... frightening...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-56820384934717593222014-05-11T02:06:27.459-07:002014-05-11T02:06:27.459-07:00Very powerful emotions emanating here that just op...Very powerful emotions emanating here that just open out the magma of a torn and bleeding heart.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-651734932616588332014-05-11T01:55:54.422-07:002014-05-11T01:55:54.422-07:00I also found that particular doll very enchanting ...I also found that particular doll very enchanting and my thoughts went the same way yours did, about how we are destroying Mother Earth... Hauntingly beautiful in all its sadness!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-77362823507553630072014-05-11T01:30:20.370-07:002014-05-11T01:30:20.370-07:00Dark indeed Sumana - very good.
Anna :o]Dark indeed Sumana - very good.<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-45974068649460860992014-05-11T01:14:19.700-07:002014-05-11T01:14:19.700-07:00This is a dark accusing writing Sumana.. those eye...This is a dark accusing writing Sumana.. those eyes ... abyss-eyes... I like that a loy.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-34217227600510234052014-05-11T00:30:01.785-07:002014-05-11T00:30:01.785-07:00Dark, mysterious and hard-hitting like the gaze of...Dark, mysterious and hard-hitting like the gaze of the doll. Powerful writing.<br />-HAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-56999962180447955632014-05-11T00:26:57.712-07:002014-05-11T00:26:57.712-07:00dark, which i wouldn't expect from you. and i ...dark, which i wouldn't expect from you. and i love the ending!Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.com