tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post3839705533956149642..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-52817505907236821242014-03-07T06:17:12.206-08:002014-03-07T06:17:12.206-08:00Oh, I really like the idea of a success chain. I ...Oh, I really like the idea of a success chain. I think we can find what we search for in life. It is better to find a 'success chain' than a 'failure chain' I think. Enjoyed your thoughts.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-2662431663344187302014-03-04T03:00:34.087-08:002014-03-04T03:00:34.087-08:00Brilliant tankas Sumana!!Brilliant tankas Sumana!!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-49220323354312049672014-03-01T20:21:45.041-08:002014-03-01T20:21:45.041-08:00I love your interpretation of success. Nature inde...I love your interpretation of success. Nature indeed succeeds (she's got the perfect formula for living) and man's deeds are links in their chains of success. I also like to think that since we are all connected that we are also part of Nature's and Man's success. Wow both were great writes Sumana.Suzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337531041006701719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-69409981198377429662014-02-27T16:10:28.419-08:002014-02-27T16:10:28.419-08:00These tankas are so thoughtful. "Rivers danc...These tankas are so thoughtful. "Rivers dance to death in sea" I think, is one of those lines of poetry that comes to mind again and again . . . lovely.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-4928727076549073262014-02-27T10:07:29.040-08:002014-02-27T10:07:29.040-08:00I specially like the first one:
In each birth ...I specially like the first one: <br /><br />In each birth and death<br />Nature scripts Her success tale<br /><br />Lovely work ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-90005789931576319962014-02-27T09:51:17.006-08:002014-02-27T09:51:17.006-08:00I love the rhythm and magic in the first piece..ni...I love the rhythm and magic in the first piece..nicely contrasted with the sense of work and human effort in the second Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-20948116852433290092014-02-27T09:25:33.528-08:002014-02-27T09:25:33.528-08:00Beautiful entwining of success to both, Sumana! Ye...Beautiful entwining of success to both, Sumana! Yes, success can be marred by tragedy too! Great write!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-36203291976623584622014-02-27T09:08:35.982-08:002014-02-27T09:08:35.982-08:00I like the first one. Nature determines success or...I like the first one. Nature determines success or not.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-51862645817209493832014-02-27T06:58:33.873-08:002014-02-27T06:58:33.873-08:00"Rivers dance to death in sea"
Stunnin..."Rivers dance to death in sea" <br /><br />Stunning lines !! fell in love with the poem..Maniparnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16109166826609932168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-67411313457562514672014-02-27T05:12:59.130-08:002014-02-27T05:12:59.130-08:00These are the BEST poems, separately and together!...These are the BEST poems, separately and together! Amazing lines/images from the very first "In each birth and death / Nature scripts Her success tale" to every way you illustrate. Taking "cue from Him" and the horror of the space shuttle ... O! And I love the theatre of it all--script and cue, dance and deed. Take a bow, Sumana Roy!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-23025069193421635992014-02-27T03:26:20.849-08:002014-02-27T03:26:20.849-08:00oh dang....each of these has pop...the second a bi...oh dang....each of these has pop...the second a bit of shock, because it surely did...i think i like the first best though....very coolBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-57289699487430405742014-02-27T02:47:24.789-08:002014-02-27T02:47:24.789-08:00"rivers dance to death in sea" Damn, I l..."rivers dance to death in sea" Damn, I love the mental picture you just gave me! Nice poem! :)M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-71663700070268539222014-02-27T01:32:09.746-08:002014-02-27T01:32:09.746-08:00I love your original take on success in both of th...I love your original take on success in both of these, the way you have tied them together, and the beautiful closing lines of each.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.com