tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post4093682925485008910..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: PathsSumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-83319395983219048642014-08-24T22:53:29.991-07:002014-08-24T22:53:29.991-07:00In every phase we configure a new path, and those ...In every phase we configure a new path, and those little children of yours will have a number of opportunities in life. I loved the line "Their feet to turn stony gathering moss", this is how we get mature. Great write! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-39173888492839208822014-08-22T17:58:42.846-07:002014-08-22T17:58:42.846-07:00Love the form you've used here, Sumana. The p...Love the form you've used here, Sumana. The poem itself has a wonderful, almost spiritual quality to it, in that I found it to be life affirming - a kind of ode to one of life's sweet passages.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-23996505416069900352014-08-22T14:53:57.815-07:002014-08-22T14:53:57.815-07:00True to form and beautiful Sumana. Love the metap...True to form and beautiful Sumana. Love the metaphor of nature's blooms and our little ones....lovely imagery!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-69564920777382518552014-08-22T14:51:01.060-07:002014-08-22T14:51:01.060-07:00"The sweet and bitter fruit" ---- a beau..."The sweet and bitter fruit" ---- a beautiful image! Your pantoum is so well done!Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-22734899302488350372014-08-22T12:33:33.553-07:002014-08-22T12:33:33.553-07:00Sumana, a beautiful pantuom! And a perfect subjec...Sumana, a beautiful pantuom! And a perfect subject for it too, the words flowed like a lovely path :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-66315943071219669532014-08-21T21:06:21.517-07:002014-08-21T21:06:21.517-07:00So wonderfully sketched! BeautifulSo wonderfully sketched! BeautifulGaurang Raohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01197327991289339685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-44067516042242287282014-08-21T09:11:01.266-07:002014-08-21T09:11:01.266-07:00Lovely! And loved the way your pantoum worked, rea...Lovely! And loved the way your pantoum worked, reading very smoothly. I immediately thought of children leaving home,Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-63475795406401444512014-08-21T05:44:59.278-07:002014-08-21T05:44:59.278-07:00A difficult form.Good attempt.A difficult form.Good attempt.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-34188187298846070642014-08-20T16:38:01.404-07:002014-08-20T16:38:01.404-07:00The path back to school is coming again, smiles ~ ...The path back to school is coming again, smiles ~ I love the playful innocence of walking to school ~<br /><br />I admire the form Sumana too as its very tricky ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-40030988935705148632014-08-20T14:31:15.236-07:002014-08-20T14:31:15.236-07:00That pantoum worked its way down the path nicely!That pantoum worked its way down the path nicely!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-71627269831014640812014-08-20T13:29:07.558-07:002014-08-20T13:29:07.558-07:00The way back to school.. the return from summer...The way back to school.. the return from summer's freedom.. a sweet path to walk to grow..lovely use of the formbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-47130877883599156642014-08-20T13:03:36.744-07:002014-08-20T13:03:36.744-07:00this is a lovely form, i like the repetition piece...this is a lovely form, i like the repetition pieces, and your theme of journeying and unknown destiny is well wrought in the imagery you used, very nice; have a good Wednesday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-37010021559059413472014-08-20T09:30:10.177-07:002014-08-20T09:30:10.177-07:00Unfolding from womb
n tossing up into soil-
the jo...Unfolding from womb<br />n tossing up into soil-<br />the journey is pre-destined<br /><br />But its only the path<br />wherein lies all wonders.<br /><br />NIce selection of topic...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-21980013315686271742014-08-20T09:02:13.332-07:002014-08-20T09:02:13.332-07:00So beautiful and the pantoum forms works really we...So beautiful and the pantoum forms works really well here. My kids go back to school next week.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-46162451160155590042014-08-20T08:59:03.012-07:002014-08-20T08:59:03.012-07:00The path to the rest of their lives. Enchanting.The path to the rest of their lives. Enchanting.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-37530439850136455302014-08-20T02:01:56.486-07:002014-08-20T02:01:56.486-07:00congratulations for hosting poetry jam and many mo...congratulations for hosting poetry jam and many more chances to comeVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-62595852498929544192014-08-20T01:09:30.818-07:002014-08-20T01:09:30.818-07:00Beautiful poem that really sings of hope, i love t...Beautiful poem that really sings of hope, i love the form and you have really crafted a lovely picture. alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-4623603660919074372014-08-19T22:52:49.712-07:002014-08-19T22:52:49.712-07:00The pantoum form suits this lovely poem so well, S...The pantoum form suits this lovely poem so well, Sumana. We see the same paths trodden by different people, and yet each traveller gathers different flowers from the wayside. I enjoyed reading it very much.Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-77406440039506814582014-08-19T21:34:12.612-07:002014-08-19T21:34:12.612-07:00It gives a feeling of anticipation and fulfillment...It gives a feeling of anticipation and fulfillment seeing young kids starting school. It's the same path for all. Wonderful write Sumana!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-51849453475713099672014-08-19T19:33:37.349-07:002014-08-19T19:33:37.349-07:00ah if only we knew when we were young what we know...ah if only we knew when we were young what we know as we are more wise...always rushing to get away (i did too) is not always the way...and there is much to be said of roots....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-29892993677096174162014-08-19T18:23:58.799-07:002014-08-19T18:23:58.799-07:00Your poem reminds us that there is always a new pa...Your poem reminds us that there is always a new path to walk on. We are lucky when someone walks side by side with us and we can face the bitter as well as the sweet together rather than alone. A beautiful write. Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-87198647372268583402014-08-19T18:23:45.999-07:002014-08-19T18:23:45.999-07:00All people walk the same path, it seems, though at...All people walk the same path, it seems, though at different times. The destination is the same. I like your theme and also your use of the pantoum form, Sumana. I haven't used the form for quite a while!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com