tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post4298158200195758052..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-39390389245921284032013-11-25T00:14:15.572-08:002013-11-25T00:14:15.572-08:00Loved your second poem - made me chuckle. It'...Loved your second poem - made me chuckle. It's sad about those stick figure models. I don't know why that's deemed attractive. They look sickly to me.Suzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337531041006701719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-58999910405849096142013-11-22T15:48:07.282-08:002013-11-22T15:48:07.282-08:00I love the inclusion of the rooster in the second ...I love the inclusion of the rooster in the second one! Great writng all together! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-81362784204766396992013-11-22T11:07:16.998-08:002013-11-22T11:07:16.998-08:00Smiling at your second one ~ As to the first, I d...Smiling at your second one ~ As to the first, I don't appreciate models so thin they are malnourished rather than sexy to me ~ <br /><br />Thanks for the share Sumana ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-63161964773378997852013-11-22T04:55:54.040-08:002013-11-22T04:55:54.040-08:00"Straw ribbed females" - what a powerful..."Straw ribbed females" - what a powerful visual! Your second poem is so clever, and now I'll sing that song for the rest of the day. :)Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-77924845857890064602013-11-21T11:06:07.500-08:002013-11-21T11:06:07.500-08:00Now that song will play in my head the rest of the...Now that song will play in my head the rest of the afternoon!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-45082285918639536182013-11-21T10:20:13.061-08:002013-11-21T10:20:13.061-08:00neither the model nor the rooster would be a tasty...neither the model nor the rooster would be a tasty meal! Well done!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-11555133566862102712013-11-21T02:09:25.071-08:002013-11-21T02:09:25.071-08:00I thought the first one was about the fox. Hea sta...I thought the first one was about the fox. Hea stangley it also works.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-55020669968031266562013-11-21T00:34:33.265-08:002013-11-21T00:34:33.265-08:00Ah! both are s lovely:)Ah! both are s lovely:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-6021703829790109832013-11-20T22:39:50.619-08:002013-11-20T22:39:50.619-08:00Ha, I see you had a lot of fun playing with the wo...Ha, I see you had a lot of fun playing with the words in the rooster/fox poem. An excellent, fun write.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-33513735612425034342013-11-20T19:20:12.720-08:002013-11-20T19:20:12.720-08:00Love your snooty fox...kind of spoiled...smilesLove your snooty fox...kind of spoiled...smileshumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-35619353880810036572013-11-20T15:49:19.691-08:002013-11-20T15:49:19.691-08:00Ha, I agree that a rooster would made a LOUSY meal...Ha, I agree that a rooster would made a LOUSY meal. Smiles.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-67509010113905680752013-11-20T15:18:05.015-08:002013-11-20T15:18:05.015-08:00Love your wordplay!Love your wordplay!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-25326431583121589612013-11-20T15:00:01.536-08:002013-11-20T15:00:01.536-08:00Love both of them....how sad we are a society obse...Love both of them....how sad we are a society obsessed with size zero...Nothing like seeing a fox get outfoxed ...lolSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-37935411606978705592013-11-20T14:46:58.600-08:002013-11-20T14:46:58.600-08:00How sad that some people will not feel good about ...How sad that some people will not feel good about themselves unless they have a size zero frame!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-56051047298233256432013-11-20T11:40:16.506-08:002013-11-20T11:40:16.506-08:00size zero fame… cockiness - both we can do without...size zero fame… cockiness - both we can do without! Well done.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-46907973597099914672013-11-20T11:38:16.842-08:002013-11-20T11:38:16.842-08:00Sumana,
Quite a sad foxy tale..Look before you le...Sumana,<br /><br />Quite a sad foxy tale..Look before you leap etc...Very clever..Both starving:)<br /><br />Eileen<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-70699028344876580322013-11-20T11:37:15.452-08:002013-11-20T11:37:15.452-08:00I enjoyed the scene you painted in the first stanz...I enjoyed the scene you painted in the first stanza and the play-on-words in the second one, Sumana!Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-83330514027703859722013-11-20T10:50:47.091-08:002013-11-20T10:50:47.091-08:00This made me smile too, the fox's chagrin at s...This made me smile too, the fox's chagrin at slipping and missing his meal.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-87968117176872496572013-11-20T09:43:51.117-08:002013-11-20T09:43:51.117-08:00Very well done! Made me smile.Very well done! Made me smile.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-13813211143425838792013-11-20T08:06:47.761-08:002013-11-20T08:06:47.761-08:00I had to smile at your many uses of the word '...I had to smile at your many uses of the word 'cock' in this poem. Surely the fox's nemesis.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-65038444846759583062013-11-20T07:50:43.270-08:002013-11-20T07:50:43.270-08:00haha a complete cock up for sure...that second one...haha a complete cock up for sure...that second one is funny....the first is a bit scary to me...they def can get the attitude but what they do to their bodies...ughBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-40561903818567341142013-11-20T07:31:39.912-08:002013-11-20T07:31:39.912-08:00The lifestyles of the models and cocky of this wor...The lifestyles of the models and cocky of this world. Right on target!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.com