tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post4454591518776675043..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: IdentitySumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-46212844683525725972014-11-26T04:01:13.806-08:002014-11-26T04:01:13.806-08:00Wow....this is so beautiful...!!!Wow....this is so beautiful...!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03517147881813705284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-18522098301223068892014-11-25T15:48:25.081-08:002014-11-25T15:48:25.081-08:00I like your extended metaphor, Sumana and the love...I like your extended metaphor, Sumana and the lovely word pictures you have included in this poem. I enjoyed reading it.Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-28528616581831540042014-11-22T22:12:56.622-08:002014-11-22T22:12:56.622-08:00Beautifully written, I could almost imagine your ...Beautifully written, I could almost imagine your life. Just loved it, Sumana! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12013012311125072637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-63561470990979498232014-11-21T08:31:50.510-08:002014-11-21T08:31:50.510-08:00I think this has become one of my favorite poems b...I think this has become one of my favorite poems by you. I love the words you've chosen to describe your journey. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-56921318337585564562014-11-21T04:21:59.485-08:002014-11-21T04:21:59.485-08:00brilliant composition, giving a message of positi...brilliant composition, giving a message of positiveness necessary in today's life<br /><br /><a href="http://cifarshayar.blogspot.com/2014/11/identity.html" rel="nofollow">Identity</a>Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-40439534728111795362014-11-20T17:31:58.255-08:002014-11-20T17:31:58.255-08:00This is an inspired write, Sumana. I love the way...This is an inspired write, Sumana. I love the way you define who you are by integrating little touchstones of physical surroundings you have passed through with a dreamy, transcendent narrative. Really exquisite.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-90269186415766687392014-11-20T10:30:42.953-08:002014-11-20T10:30:42.953-08:00What a beautiful poem this is! I especially love h...What a beautiful poem this is! I especially love how it builds to its closing, from "I’ve loved this life<br />In this long pilgrimage<br />I have seen the sunrise<br />The moonlit silver streams<br />And also a Pole Star<br />My wavy notes dream<br />Of never losing the way."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-47913892160021918952014-11-20T08:53:41.051-08:002014-11-20T08:53:41.051-08:00You've captured life's journey well.You've captured life's journey well.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-35716341455295647312014-11-20T04:06:09.835-08:002014-11-20T04:06:09.835-08:00Beautiful lines...what better way than to have a f...Beautiful lines...what better way than to have a flowing life!PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09777057015005418560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-54375824169498651522014-11-20T02:24:05.315-08:002014-11-20T02:24:05.315-08:00Superb. Wonderfully worded, Sumana.Superb. Wonderfully worded, Sumana.Vinithahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13443178374019579137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-31167007314905539392014-11-19T18:01:22.758-08:002014-11-19T18:01:22.758-08:00My Hope is built on nothing less. Lovely words, S...My Hope is built on nothing less. Lovely words, Sumana!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-49418424931460959712014-11-19T17:44:42.643-08:002014-11-19T17:44:42.643-08:00Sumana,
A wonderfully painted image of a life jou...Sumana,<br /><br />A wonderfully painted image of a life journey, with its ups and downs, through your poetic words. The natural way, via the elements of life...<br /><br />Eileen Eileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-73455683086731691742014-11-19T11:07:48.650-08:002014-11-19T11:07:48.650-08:00magical words that sing like a psalm of knowledge,...magical words that sing like a psalm of knowledge, this is a real emotional, image filled journey. alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-10155536241422912492014-11-19T05:29:59.980-08:002014-11-19T05:29:59.980-08:00A lyrical poem of life flowing through our veins e...A lyrical poem of life flowing through our veins each one of us connected to the other.elaine https://www.blogger.com/profile/17075935631756457901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-13329538879506133702014-11-19T05:15:11.810-08:002014-11-19T05:15:11.810-08:00a lovely ode to self, i'm there with you in th...a lovely ode to self, i'm there with you in the flock Sumana<br />have a nice Wednesday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-64231050591068943642014-11-19T03:35:48.701-08:002014-11-19T03:35:48.701-08:00Brilliant! So vibrant and joyful!!Brilliant! So vibrant and joyful!!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-37565917916451257152014-11-18T21:58:42.992-08:002014-11-18T21:58:42.992-08:00Wordless... Brilliantly expressed...
Loved these l...Wordless... Brilliantly expressed...<br />Loved these lines : <br />"Let the dark sky twinkle<br />With the hope"<br /><br />Hope - The key to life!Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-64320868967877323202014-11-18T21:09:41.422-08:002014-11-18T21:09:41.422-08:00Self as a stream or river is a good metaphor for l...Self as a stream or river is a good metaphor for life I think. And we do wind so many directions and places always heading for infinity. Your poem made me think about the infinity we flow towards. Food for thought for me.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-79556266539152646242014-11-18T20:28:03.025-08:002014-11-18T20:28:03.025-08:00I love the feeling of a life well-lived, despite s...I love the feeling of a life well-lived, despite some inevitable hardships, as well as the idea of a connection with the divine. "I have seen the sunrise ? The moonlit silver streams ? And also a Pole Star' - great and beautiful use of the celestial bodies!Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-9127576530340292312014-11-18T20:24:51.143-08:002014-11-18T20:24:51.143-08:00I like the way you have described your life journe...I like the way you have described your life journey, Sumana....flowing toward an unknown infinity, branching out at different times....and always there is hope. Nice.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-884218706291756722014-11-18T20:12:19.826-08:002014-11-18T20:12:19.826-08:00smiles...what a cool analogy/metaphor...the rivule...smiles...what a cool analogy/metaphor...the rivulet in the stream...the long pilgrimage together...and it is a beautiful thing too the devotion to that direction...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com