tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post5101534289068001527..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Towards LightSumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-74720799124119426922015-10-10T03:00:13.730-07:002015-10-10T03:00:13.730-07:00Wow,this is beautiful. The sadness,the pain,the he...Wow,this is beautiful. The sadness,the pain,the heart break. I can feel what you felt. Very well doneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10789110344284451941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-52400395869155324562015-10-09T15:04:28.108-07:002015-10-09T15:04:28.108-07:00An eloquent haibun. "My doll’s house is brok...An eloquent haibun. "My doll’s house is broken though and the doll gone. Yet play is not done." ... so tender and poignant.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-45575564351966416042015-10-07T20:00:51.778-07:002015-10-07T20:00:51.778-07:00I love this line, " the lunar smile outshinin...I love this line, " the lunar smile outshining the sequined sky. " such a positive beautiful poem!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-36334573474340910932015-10-07T18:12:30.570-07:002015-10-07T18:12:30.570-07:00Yes, always towards the light. I liked the promise...Yes, always towards the light. I liked the promise in this, drawing me deeper. None of us play enough, do we? Even with our sadness...mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-68760034884663934212015-10-07T02:48:05.489-07:002015-10-07T02:48:05.489-07:00I sit by the radiant path
Eyes towards a light
On...I sit by the radiant path<br />Eyes towards a light<br /><br />One is ever hopeful that there is light at the end of the tunnel!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-15044336980423581232015-10-07T01:01:52.419-07:002015-10-07T01:01:52.419-07:00Lovely haibun.. I love the phrase "This life ...Lovely haibun.. I love the phrase "This life is a child’s play with a doll house". Even for me it is.. Nice one.. Hemahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07294988016590688465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-62813040605890433832015-10-06T22:00:34.430-07:002015-10-06T22:00:34.430-07:00Hope reigns!Hope reigns!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-16781323834635013832015-10-06T19:42:01.379-07:002015-10-06T19:42:01.379-07:00I kinda took the broken dollhouse line as even tho...I kinda took the broken dollhouse line as even though things happen in life, you still play on and live on. maybe I am reading it wrong but that is how it struck me.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-2349330174081283832015-10-06T19:40:01.942-07:002015-10-06T19:40:01.942-07:00This is absolutely breathtaking, Sumana. The broke...This is absolutely breathtaking, Sumana. The broken dollhouse, the doll gone......."I sit by the radiant path". And you shine.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-469579092428139642015-10-06T13:19:11.105-07:002015-10-06T13:19:11.105-07:00A lovely comparison of life as play...yes, I belie...A lovely comparison of life as play...yes, I believe it is. I love that your eyes are turned toward the light. That's all you need.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-42178697493788772632015-10-06T11:29:22.181-07:002015-10-06T11:29:22.181-07:00Most of us lose the doll, & find the doll hous...Most of us lose the doll, & find the doll house in need of repair, but I agree that the inner child, the playfulness can remain. Very touching<br />haibun & lovely dark yet hopeful haiku.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-91854580185439497902015-10-06T10:51:13.176-07:002015-10-06T10:51:13.176-07:00Beautifully and spiritually written. The senryu a...Beautifully and spiritually written. The senryu at the end sums it all up so wonderfully. Spencer is Kanzensakuratonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-91526655903113480622015-10-06T08:52:31.818-07:002015-10-06T08:52:31.818-07:00A play.. a liFe..
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Child...A play.. a liFe..<br />of eYes..<br />a child<br />as<br />US..<br /><br />Child's play<br />ageless timeless<br />liVes uS..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-36101753187493450552015-10-06T08:35:34.355-07:002015-10-06T08:35:34.355-07:00Beautifully told.Beautifully told.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-65488814311752014912015-10-06T07:45:05.796-07:002015-10-06T07:45:05.796-07:00Sumana, this is beautiful and touching. A broken,...Sumana, this is beautiful and touching. A broken, empty doll house is such a sad image. But there's hope in this writing too. And that's what will sustain you. Your faith will too. Through your words, I sense your strength. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-13346697548793497952015-10-06T06:22:43.676-07:002015-10-06T06:22:43.676-07:00I love the positive thoughts and being open again ...I love the positive thoughts and being open again to play....to light.<br />Breathtaking haibun, Sumana. humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-88992876904432386302015-10-06T05:20:54.553-07:002015-10-06T05:20:54.553-07:00I specially love this part:
My doll’s house is br...I specially love this part:<br /><br />My doll’s house is broken though and the doll gone. Yet play is not done.<br /><br />And that haiku line, eyes towards the light, speaks of hope and love ~ Thanks for participating in our Haibun Monday ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-89208489314122854832015-10-06T05:18:15.190-07:002015-10-06T05:18:15.190-07:00This is very touching, Sumana. Speaks to the fact...This is very touching, Sumana. Speaks to the fact that we have to go on living even after 'the doll' is gone. Thankfully, the light still remains and there are others who touch one on the journey homeward. Loved the haiku -- I see a person on the path with views of past and future.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-54096128496501604202015-10-06T02:29:47.031-07:002015-10-06T02:29:47.031-07:00Lovely haiku.Lovely haiku.Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-58055388378330762142015-10-06T02:11:34.235-07:002015-10-06T02:11:34.235-07:00I see the spiritual connection you always make wit...I see the spiritual connection you always make with your posts... It's a difficult thing to write about..you do it well. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-85340411099214553632015-10-06T01:48:14.712-07:002015-10-06T01:48:14.712-07:00This is so evocative of Tagore. Beautiful haibun. ...This is so evocative of Tagore. Beautiful haibun. Playful, yet wise. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-47052688840712046702015-10-06T00:31:57.123-07:002015-10-06T00:31:57.123-07:00Very beautiful! I especially like the dancing rive...Very beautiful! I especially like the dancing river, and the haiku.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-67019880120543579052015-10-05T23:52:44.594-07:002015-10-05T23:52:44.594-07:00Oh the sadness in a broken dollhouse without a dol...Oh the sadness in a broken dollhouse without a doll.. You bring tears to my eyes.. really strong haibun, I hope there is yet many sources of light for you.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com