tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post5103848466921584674..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-84170277728008816362014-04-23T17:18:11.671-07:002014-04-23T17:18:11.671-07:00short
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completeshort<br />sweet<br />completeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-10689747178515591772014-04-22T23:59:52.122-07:002014-04-22T23:59:52.122-07:00lovely image ~lovely image ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-50932395135291037672014-04-22T21:21:31.331-07:002014-04-22T21:21:31.331-07:00I love the pond holding "the sky in her bosom...I love the pond holding "the sky in her bosom" as the reflection... Sumana, this is a deceptively simple poem. Your final statement says you are at peace with the pure beauty of this moment. Loved it! AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-86901834964644839012014-04-22T15:41:44.995-07:002014-04-22T15:41:44.995-07:00Beautiful images and thoughtful words. I found the...Beautiful images and thoughtful words. I found the lack of punctuation added to the poem, rather than detracted from it.Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-91732183285422792822014-04-22T05:21:58.482-07:002014-04-22T05:21:58.482-07:00Lovely. I know ponds like that. Should try to ma...Lovely. I know ponds like that. Should try to make my mind more like them! K. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-20233840371583517632014-04-22T00:00:29.543-07:002014-04-22T00:00:29.543-07:00Poem is so much like a painting...
Pretty!Poem is so much like a painting...<br />Pretty!Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-45578948874777848282014-04-21T18:50:50.005-07:002014-04-21T18:50:50.005-07:00a dewdrop holds the sun! I adore that. The whole...a dewdrop holds the sun! I adore that. The whole poem is stunning.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-37566165408753979472014-04-21T09:49:37.605-07:002014-04-21T09:49:37.605-07:00"The stomach is full, the ocean no fuller, bo..."The stomach is full, the ocean no fuller, both have the same quality of fullness. In that, then, one is equal to the other." -- William Carlos WilliamsMark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-26836579651112910192014-04-21T08:49:37.576-07:002014-04-21T08:49:37.576-07:00Oh my this is so beautiful! I'm so glad I stop...Oh my this is so beautiful! I'm so glad I stopped by, Sumana. <3Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-13199595391815326692014-04-21T06:29:17.730-07:002014-04-21T06:29:17.730-07:00That is so sweet and a lovely imagery poem!That is so sweet and a lovely imagery poem!Kerridwenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07114162167451828767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-50371197015093172492014-04-21T04:58:55.902-07:002014-04-21T04:58:55.902-07:00Gorgeous picture. Nature within a beautiful statem...Gorgeous picture. Nature within a beautiful statementSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-32895200298428883272014-04-21T04:02:22.249-07:002014-04-21T04:02:22.249-07:00Lovely picture and words, but some punctuation wou...Lovely picture and words, but some punctuation would be a great addition...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-33495801663044158492014-04-21T03:37:46.939-07:002014-04-21T03:37:46.939-07:00lovely reflection shot....and a really nice feel t...lovely reflection shot....and a really nice feel to this...it feels like so much...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-81664147404076471682014-04-21T03:30:35.000-07:002014-04-21T03:30:35.000-07:00Beautiful, the eye of "I" become pond, s...Beautiful, the eye of "I" become pond, sun, one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-46680516171567123092014-04-21T01:54:51.068-07:002014-04-21T01:54:51.068-07:00It is beautiful and can be read in so many ways. W...It is beautiful and can be read in so many ways. What struck me the most is the final line that I read as if the 'I' in the poem is missing her/his heart and needs to find it again. Beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-5080438873462854962014-04-21T01:13:29.331-07:002014-04-21T01:13:29.331-07:00Ah!! such a beautiful description of nature's ...Ah!! such a beautiful description of nature's beauty and when our heart is filled with it, we need nothing more!!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com