tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post6824764010365791952..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-43492779175881994092014-05-17T14:00:57.660-07:002014-05-17T14:00:57.660-07:00Thank you for your visit at my site. Happy to com...Thank you for your visit at my site. Happy to come back and read through your poems of season.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-53656532095950270802014-05-17T07:57:09.252-07:002014-05-17T07:57:09.252-07:00Beautiful way of representing seasons..Sumana
Beautiful way of representing seasons..Sumana<br />Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-31666365136870921262014-05-17T06:15:31.357-07:002014-05-17T06:15:31.357-07:00This is fluid and beautiful, with dream like quali...This is fluid and beautiful, with dream like qualities! Lovely~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-28364185296425975452014-05-16T22:31:45.698-07:002014-05-16T22:31:45.698-07:00This is wonderful - the closing word/line of each ...This is wonderful - the closing word/line of each stanza carefully chosen to evoke and represent each season.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-90737710290090405012014-05-16T18:19:00.343-07:002014-05-16T18:19:00.343-07:00Beautiful seasonal depiction with tilus, smiles. W...Beautiful seasonal depiction with tilus, smiles. Well crafted :)Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-37728190732221853002014-05-16T12:25:44.480-07:002014-05-16T12:25:44.480-07:00loved your repeat of words from one to the next - ...loved your repeat of words from one to the next - beautifully done! KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-75985443671047629162014-05-16T08:42:53.114-07:002014-05-16T08:42:53.114-07:00I really enjoy how in #3 and #4, your second lines...I really enjoy how in #3 and #4, your second lines were just one word. Gave the second lines almost as much "punch" as the final. Also really enjoyed how you brought us through the seasons, and how each leads to the next, and even the last links back to the first. Full circle!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-11641924892917590672014-05-16T00:46:37.125-07:002014-05-16T00:46:37.125-07:00Very beautiful transition of seasons using the til...Very beautiful transition of seasons using the tilus form. thank you for these lovely offering. It falls naturally with your words. I enjoyed it. Thank you. Smiles.kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-52889690930528838282014-05-15T23:46:50.934-07:002014-05-15T23:46:50.934-07:00like the chain reaction
poems linked
sweetlike the chain reaction<br />poems linked<br />sweetavalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051456576217305095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-28485285533839775942014-05-15T23:01:25.770-07:002014-05-15T23:01:25.770-07:00Loved them all....superb.Loved them all....superb.JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-28568410860262038442014-05-15T22:04:11.231-07:002014-05-15T22:04:11.231-07:00Love the visual evocations!Love the visual evocations!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-41053832496037867902014-05-15T21:45:51.707-07:002014-05-15T21:45:51.707-07:00I love this seasonal progression, and the fact tha...I love this seasonal progression, and the fact that you leave us with the optimism and new beginning of Spring.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-57266609524686316242014-05-15T20:30:52.774-07:002014-05-15T20:30:52.774-07:00All the emotions and activities associated with se...All the emotions and activities associated with seasons expressed beautifully.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-73852559484778785102014-05-15T20:01:18.709-07:002014-05-15T20:01:18.709-07:00Excellent use of the form to explore the seasons. ...Excellent use of the form to explore the seasons. Nice read!Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-41759121443603891472014-05-15T19:53:12.585-07:002014-05-15T19:53:12.585-07:00consistent theme and beautiful..consistent theme and beautiful..Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-36481787062419113762014-05-15T19:19:47.626-07:002014-05-15T19:19:47.626-07:00i like your imagery and the rhythm of the seasons!...i like your imagery and the rhythm of the seasons!lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03991892804149727665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-7270974802315638812014-05-15T16:40:23.028-07:002014-05-15T16:40:23.028-07:00love the incorporation of the last word into the n...love the incorporation of the last word into the next stanzas, excellent progression of seasons. well doneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-55668594085390869372014-05-15T16:03:39.255-07:002014-05-15T16:03:39.255-07:00Oh, I like each of yours, Sumana. You have taken ...Oh, I like each of yours, Sumana. You have taken control of the form. I like #2 very much... Yes, pride before the fall.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-76431132459759677592014-05-15T15:34:43.965-07:002014-05-15T15:34:43.965-07:00The seasons color brightly and spring speaks beaut...The seasons color brightly and spring speaks beautifully.<br /><br />I like this poem a lot. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-71381949797838210112014-05-15T15:01:54.522-07:002014-05-15T15:01:54.522-07:00I like the use of seasons specially the last one ...I like the use of seasons specially the last one as its spring from where we are ~ Good response Sumana ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-81334929331713831672014-05-15T13:49:06.756-07:002014-05-15T13:49:06.756-07:00Four seasons on one day - what a clever construct....Four seasons on one day - what a clever construct. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-55747141215767520302014-05-15T12:46:05.643-07:002014-05-15T12:46:05.643-07:00Writing one tilus per season was a great idea! I l...Writing one tilus per season was a great idea! I like the spring one best, I think.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-86959588886857209972014-05-15T11:24:21.509-07:002014-05-15T11:24:21.509-07:00The second one contains so much wisdom. That works...The second one contains so much wisdom. That works well with mebrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-6540909211075298322014-05-15T11:07:28.508-07:002014-05-15T11:07:28.508-07:00i like that last one...its got a cool assumed imag...i like that last one...its got a cool assumed image of the butterflies bursting forth as the world awakes...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-73114037240531479782014-05-15T11:03:23.119-07:002014-05-15T11:03:23.119-07:00Lovely 4-season slides of the year, all in action....Lovely 4-season slides of the year, all in action.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com