tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post7843134088899424829..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Come WinterSumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-37859235303366680802015-12-14T16:17:18.815-08:002015-12-14T16:17:18.815-08:00This is a lovely, eloquent sonnet, with wonderful ...This is a lovely, eloquent sonnet, with wonderful images cascading throughout. The closing two lines are just beautiful. A moving piece. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-75641510704075902262015-12-14T08:46:23.757-08:002015-12-14T08:46:23.757-08:00Magical!Magical!Nirvana on firehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00212043955046505216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-14394571739829544622015-12-14T06:51:37.767-08:002015-12-14T06:51:37.767-08:00Toasty heart, indeed!Toasty heart, indeed!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-72813583456733176792015-12-14T05:41:21.835-08:002015-12-14T05:41:21.835-08:00Such beautiful imagery - i especially like the chr...Such beautiful imagery - i especially like the chrysanthemum smile :)Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-2477416051966023292015-12-13T18:55:27.766-08:002015-12-13T18:55:27.766-08:00What a delightful poem about the inevitability of ...What a delightful poem about the inevitability of changing seasons. It reminded me of the poem by Ralph Hodgeson, "Time you old gypsy man will you not stay".Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-65469951631541431672015-12-13T18:06:30.822-08:002015-12-13T18:06:30.822-08:00Such a great piece! I especially like that opening...Such a great piece! I especially like that opening line... Cheers is such a nice way to start. Matthew Henningsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05561605742904573649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-25199226098819575302015-12-13T15:16:34.420-08:002015-12-13T15:16:34.420-08:00Really like those final lines, they caught me unaw...Really like those final lines, they caught me unaware,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-23799190482177515452015-12-13T11:44:35.811-08:002015-12-13T11:44:35.811-08:00Your winter is so different from our winters.. I t...Your winter is so different from our winters.. I think I would love a little bit of your warmth.. a lovely sonnet.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-58934301712795819232015-12-13T10:45:44.230-08:002015-12-13T10:45:44.230-08:00May your scorched heart be nurtured by a gentle an...May your scorched heart be nurtured by a gentle and kind winter!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-74708168166789240492015-12-13T10:03:15.691-08:002015-12-13T10:03:15.691-08:00Oh those closing lines are perfection.......a wond...Oh those closing lines are perfection.......a wonderful poem, Sumana.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-78951143683678878582015-12-13T09:04:25.424-08:002015-12-13T09:04:25.424-08:00I think I just saw Old Man Winter smile. ♥I think I just saw Old Man Winter smile. ♥Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-3243268734326399422015-12-13T07:39:07.211-08:002015-12-13T07:39:07.211-08:00Oh there is a heaven in your poetry today as you s...Oh there is a heaven in your poetry today as you sing a song of winter....the ending lines are perfection and sing to me too!<br /><br />Donna@LivingFromHappinessDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13420133886162844400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-16799302169937686782015-12-13T05:49:51.653-08:002015-12-13T05:49:51.653-08:00The closing lines are magical :D :D
Beautifully re...The closing lines are magical :D :D<br />Beautifully rendered.<br /><br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-78811103668738761772015-12-13T05:45:04.294-08:002015-12-13T05:45:04.294-08:00Burnt skin...burnt heart.. Nicely done with the ch...Burnt skin...burnt heart.. Nicely done with the change up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-25013738372732134942015-12-13T05:21:00.285-08:002015-12-13T05:21:00.285-08:00lovely sonnet, Sumana. delightful imagery.
we don&...lovely sonnet, Sumana. delightful imagery.<br />we don't have winter over here, but it's almost raining everyday these past weeks.<br />dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.com