tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post8239760867471786316..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Sound of SilenceSumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-67747388208541860632015-09-13T10:15:39.394-07:002015-09-13T10:15:39.394-07:00This is a nice poem. I like the first two lines es...This is a nice poem. I like the first two lines especially. The end is good too. The sounds of silence can sometimes be loud. Also, love the beach imagery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-62384448199455367272015-09-04T11:33:16.348-07:002015-09-04T11:33:16.348-07:00Hi,
I guess I am the first person right from Balur...Hi,<br />I guess I am the first person right from Balurghat to comment on your blog. :P Never mind.I had spotted your blog on IndiBlogger days ago and have kept visiting once or twice in a while ever since then.I couldn't keep myself from not responding to someone who listens to Simon And Garfunkel while living in this suburbian town where not too many people understand the values of multi-faceted culture.This is beautiful,indeed.<br />Titas Biswashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03385123036859173134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-91602762309656782022015-08-24T23:44:23.355-07:002015-08-24T23:44:23.355-07:00A melancholy poem, written from the heart, Sumana....A melancholy poem, written from the heart, Sumana. Simply beautiful and so very poignant...Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-57830747477369024032015-08-24T16:09:05.202-07:002015-08-24T16:09:05.202-07:00This is so-o-o-o good . . . the final echo echoing...This is so-o-o-o good . . . the final echo echoing perfectly.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-17870345176387605292015-08-24T06:40:40.691-07:002015-08-24T06:40:40.691-07:00The structure of the echo works so powerfully here...The structure of the echo works so powerfully here, Sumana - just perfect! claireylovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16691439928758477628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-91218450151138503302015-08-23T22:00:52.493-07:002015-08-23T22:00:52.493-07:00the ruin / win echo I found most interesting ~the ruin / win echo I found most interesting ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-30522473710971297922015-08-22T02:53:44.916-07:002015-08-22T02:53:44.916-07:00The rhythms of the waves create a beautiful ebb an...The rhythms of the waves create a beautiful ebb and flow effect in these thoughts. Synchronised.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-89361006146217357372015-08-22T02:25:43.742-07:002015-08-22T02:25:43.742-07:00Sound of silence is beautiful as well as blissful....Sound of silence is beautiful as well as blissful. I am glad that you picked this form - I love it already. Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-38957581755228659932015-08-21T23:22:21.098-07:002015-08-21T23:22:21.098-07:00Truly amazing most animals
walk with shores
as Lif...Truly amazing most animals<br />walk with shores<br />as Life<br />and most<br />only<br />humans<br />walk<br />against<br />shores<br />as death..<br />And humans<br />think.. and <br />humans<br />think<br />think<br />thINk<br />lost...<br />losing<br />lost......<br />waiting<br />for waves<br />to come back<br />AS Ocean of LOVE..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-6022397031352935972015-08-21T21:42:44.775-07:002015-08-21T21:42:44.775-07:00Love how you echoed "ruin" with "wi...Love how you echoed "ruin" with "win". I would have never caught that, but it works perfectly...and especially as "win" is such a contrast to ruin. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-15046230366401964122015-08-21T13:57:56.245-07:002015-08-21T13:57:56.245-07:00Great and powerful use of the echo form, Sumana. T...Great and powerful use of the echo form, Sumana. The beginning of the poem conveys pain but in the end we feel a sense of calm, despite everything.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-89942269558647976862015-08-21T13:26:15.733-07:002015-08-21T13:26:15.733-07:00This was worth the wait. Glad you still published...This was worth the wait. Glad you still published after the prompt expired. the echoes so wonderfully underline the lines. Excellent work.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-83994356511346327552015-08-21T13:25:31.345-07:002015-08-21T13:25:31.345-07:00I'm glad you waited to link this here and now ...I'm glad you waited to link this here and now - the wait was worth it. You did an excellent job with this and the echoes really make the lines.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-82105162093633781722015-08-21T11:07:37.926-07:002015-08-21T11:07:37.926-07:00This is the third echo poem I've encountered o...This is the third echo poem I've encountered out on the dVerse trail; nice work on the form; the magic is in the choice of echo words. I liked your lines /in the heart that will rise that splits the night/ Echo--<br />Might/.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-42924310043590608372015-08-21T11:04:05.804-07:002015-08-21T11:04:05.804-07:00Very thoughtfully penned.Very thoughtfully penned.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-40469301772177691792015-08-21T06:22:19.247-07:002015-08-21T06:22:19.247-07:00Darkness with the glittering smile of stars
A supp...Darkness with the glittering smile of stars<br />A suppressed wail from my inside wells up<br /><br />One can still pick the pieces to take a grip on oneself. It is good to cry out and get it out of the system. It works apparently! Great echoes Sumana!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-59652705616971609192015-08-21T04:54:48.623-07:002015-08-21T04:54:48.623-07:00Very nice to be able to read this poem another tim...Very nice to be able to read this poem another time, Sumana! This poem is definitely worth a reread for me, with its strong message becoming even stronger second time around.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-80271602774292088122015-08-21T04:43:23.276-07:002015-08-21T04:43:23.276-07:00As long as you have that belief I think you will e...As long as you have that belief I think you will ever have the strength to rise again. Some smart rhymes in the echoes like ruin to win.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-27356013762910707442015-08-21T04:33:46.131-07:002015-08-21T04:33:46.131-07:00I felt that sadness specially in the last two line...I felt that sadness specially in the last two lines:<br /><br />In the heart that will rise that splits the night<br />Hollering tides will recede and touch the sound of silence<br /><br />And a wonderful echo verse too ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-83920817612532658312015-08-21T04:05:13.029-07:002015-08-21T04:05:13.029-07:00nice take on the echo poem... i like the hope in t...nice take on the echo poem... i like the hope in this even in a dark moment - and now you have put an earworm in my ear and i will have to hum sound of silence all day long...oyClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-50354639600379881712015-08-21T03:39:09.223-07:002015-08-21T03:39:09.223-07:00New style of expression.
Touching words :)New style of expression.<br />Touching words :)Anita Sabathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13365472694082398017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-91605963374961299772015-08-21T03:38:29.316-07:002015-08-21T03:38:29.316-07:00Echo! Wonderfully written. I love S&G and so i...Echo! Wonderfully written. I love S&G and so is this poem. Thanks for sharingShamsud Ahmedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10402062675521045468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-89750144902578732582015-08-20T21:37:21.324-07:002015-08-20T21:37:21.324-07:00So sad to be left there on that shore.. Just waiti...So sad to be left there on that shore.. Just waiting for the solace to sooth the pain.. There is still that sliver of hope..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-26038485396332086012015-08-20T19:31:10.617-07:002015-08-20T19:31:10.617-07:00The vision, the Quiescence - So powerful!!The vision, the Quiescence - So powerful!!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-59377533249785780902015-08-20T12:13:20.353-07:002015-08-20T12:13:20.353-07:00Impeccably done! What a unique style of poetry.......Impeccably done! What a unique style of poetry....lovely lovely verses, Sumana!! Delightful read... Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.com