tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post8406643856435824642..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: ScentSumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-6233834304902996942016-05-31T01:22:59.456-07:002016-05-31T01:22:59.456-07:00Strong and intensely concentrated write...Strong and intensely concentrated write...scotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-8566807952872445462016-05-27T11:37:47.989-07:002016-05-27T11:37:47.989-07:00I loved the way you started: "I smell darknes...I loved the way you started: "I smell darkness<br />in the bloody dawn"<br /><br />Such a powerful expression!Tarang Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-64682727436813418292016-05-22T09:29:48.124-07:002016-05-22T09:29:48.124-07:00An amazing write!An amazing write!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-78508082947462755762016-05-13T06:39:01.341-07:002016-05-13T06:39:01.341-07:00Wow!Wow!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-24944294488762453292016-05-10T13:48:44.242-07:002016-05-10T13:48:44.242-07:00When the people cannot speak the way the way of li...When the people cannot speak the way the way of life we wish for will be lost, good writing.ScottlBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09147326078011352857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-24823585091482293492016-05-10T07:51:19.000-07:002016-05-10T07:51:19.000-07:00You portrayed your "disgust" beautifully...You portrayed your "disgust" beautifully XXXGinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08814694362956456055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-34154683440016347132016-05-09T18:47:29.656-07:002016-05-09T18:47:29.656-07:00An intense and powerful piece. Pinning the events...An intense and powerful piece. Pinning the events of dark days against the scent of blood and the hope that fragrant roses will return, is truly inspired. A moving piece, Sumana. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-47870477615396020492016-05-09T15:34:54.011-07:002016-05-09T15:34:54.011-07:00monstrous - you really give that sense of injustic...monstrous - you really give that sense of injustice in your words.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-79285401345890635472016-05-09T09:16:25.889-07:002016-05-09T09:16:25.889-07:00A powerful poem! I hope darkness lifts to reveal t...A powerful poem! I hope darkness lifts to reveal the rose blooming days. Khaya Ronkainenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06286352495379234651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-31837415202684522872016-05-08T22:03:06.001-07:002016-05-08T22:03:06.001-07:00So evocative!So evocative!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-42729626181335759322016-05-08T19:31:56.783-07:002016-05-08T19:31:56.783-07:00Very nicely done Sumana.. it's so tragic that ...Very nicely done Sumana.. it's so tragic that everything has become about power and greed at any cost..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-78309762666656885342016-05-08T16:07:46.524-07:002016-05-08T16:07:46.524-07:00It's so sad that so often, all over the globe,...It's so sad that so often, all over the globe, there is too often darkness associated with the election process. Well expressed.<br />http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com<br />(Google won't let me comment using wordpress)Victoria Ceretto-Slottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11791036961620087347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-91579240950573604432016-05-08T14:58:13.780-07:002016-05-08T14:58:13.780-07:00I believe we all wish for those rose blooming days...I believe we all wish for those rose blooming days...<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-68097268331099199272016-05-08T09:25:10.138-07:002016-05-08T09:25:10.138-07:00Days of darkness seem to be spreading all over the...Days of darkness seem to be spreading all over the world...Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-39999586562041557002016-05-08T09:13:34.621-07:002016-05-08T09:13:34.621-07:00It's amazing how ugly politics can be. It'...It's amazing how ugly politics can be. It's such a divisive force that wants to convince us we are separate not equal.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-49367718104662653782016-05-08T09:11:50.038-07:002016-05-08T09:11:50.038-07:00Like many people have said, those first lines real...Like many people have said, those first lines really bring the reader in. Smelling darkness... what a great line. Matthew Henningsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05561605742904573649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-74127510993246569402016-05-08T08:21:58.859-07:002016-05-08T08:21:58.859-07:00the first line already demands attention.
a powerf...the first line already demands attention.<br />a powerful write! the stakes are too high and these people are just out for personal gain, i guess.dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-33070669677419980322016-05-08T08:16:28.092-07:002016-05-08T08:16:28.092-07:00Such atrocities committed in the name of politics ...Such atrocities committed in the name of politics and power...beautifully rendered with power and sadness.<br /><br /><br />Donna@LivingFromHappinessDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13420133886162844400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-68553067024236006132016-05-08T06:23:06.980-07:002016-05-08T06:23:06.980-07:00Happy Sunday Sumana
Much love...Happy Sunday Sumana<br /><br />Much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-60314411437654090942016-05-08T05:54:01.824-07:002016-05-08T05:54:01.824-07:00Perfect title for this dark occurrences. Our count...Perfect title for this dark occurrences. Our country is voting its new leader tomorrow too and I am hoping that it will be violence-free. totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-42477460670425615722016-05-08T02:42:43.171-07:002016-05-08T02:42:43.171-07:00What a perfect description of scent and how it fee...What a perfect description of scent and how it feels - darkness and the body dawn are almost tangible in their aroma - oh for rosesJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-18652160505097751352016-05-08T02:41:19.939-07:002016-05-08T02:41:19.939-07:00When I liken the "rose-blooming" days to...When I liken the "rose-blooming" days to the potential of democracy, I fear so. I fear the days are over unless the bloody dawns end, and those who grab at power find something else to live for Can we interest hunters into gathering instead?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-52169491727641894542016-05-08T00:35:00.387-07:002016-05-08T00:35:00.387-07:00I smell brimstone!I smell brimstone!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-26945894113165039212016-05-07T23:38:19.185-07:002016-05-07T23:38:19.185-07:00To manipulate the voting thus, in a pretense of de...To manipulate the voting thus, in a pretense of democracy. A sad state, I still hope there will be secret gardens filled with roses.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-60903903905686510282016-05-07T22:25:02.092-07:002016-05-07T22:25:02.092-07:00My goodness – and we think America has problems! (...My goodness – and we think America has problems! (Or Australia for that matter.) But, even worse than having to choose between unappealing candidates, is not to have a true choice at all.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.com