tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post9184147995022728990..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: MartyrSumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-22153446183399919022015-08-03T21:40:53.901-07:002015-08-03T21:40:53.901-07:00I hope she can find her way out of hell. Strong pi...I hope she can find her way out of hell. Strong piece!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-61115208278612130892015-08-02T14:43:37.717-07:002015-08-02T14:43:37.717-07:00Yikes! :-)
ZQYikes! :-)<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-970421510352725192015-08-02T10:51:35.792-07:002015-08-02T10:51:35.792-07:00It truly is a terrible situation to have your thin...It truly is a terrible situation to have your things and privacy violated and not be able to escape or rectify the situation.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-41720715786181776122015-08-02T09:59:01.650-07:002015-08-02T09:59:01.650-07:00the bitter walk of stone underfoot... ~the bitter walk of stone underfoot... ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-75030944463091668292015-08-02T09:27:03.235-07:002015-08-02T09:27:03.235-07:00So much tension... rage... and apprehension...
M...So much tension... rage... and apprehension... <br /><br />May she find the means to walk away, and she set boundaries no one can trespass easily. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-12822180860903070522015-08-02T07:46:31.515-07:002015-08-02T07:46:31.515-07:00Reminds me of the interaction between a teen and a...Reminds me of the interaction between a teen and an overprotective mother. Well written!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-15371570550972043452015-08-02T05:23:16.119-07:002015-08-02T05:23:16.119-07:00I do hope she finds the strength to 'walk out ...I do hope she finds the strength to 'walk out of this hell.'Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-85271851455461517422015-08-02T05:07:29.992-07:002015-08-02T05:07:29.992-07:00Loved the closing line.. such a melancholic feel t...Loved the closing line.. such a melancholic feel to this poem.. a mixture of resentment and longing.<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-7278930369247674692015-08-02T04:22:41.411-07:002015-08-02T04:22:41.411-07:00Beautifully wovenBeautifully wovenmagiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-74818576025640318822015-08-02T04:04:22.342-07:002015-08-02T04:04:22.342-07:00Ah. This is a vivid exchange-- I imagine teen and...Ah. This is a vivid exchange-- I imagine teen and parent or wife and husband-- well done. K. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-63548044805442226852015-08-02T04:00:33.175-07:002015-08-02T04:00:33.175-07:00Too sad that her stony feet can't walk out of ...Too sad that her stony feet can't walk out of the hellish situation ~ Nice weaving of both prompts ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-76044858072789407882015-08-02T01:25:03.902-07:002015-08-02T01:25:03.902-07:00As ad and all too common story.As ad and all too common story.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-87796971664883910592015-08-02T01:05:45.809-07:002015-08-02T01:05:45.809-07:00The words 'trespass' and 'martyr' ...The words 'trespass' and 'martyr' go very well together.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-55275185000877709642015-08-02T00:39:51.528-07:002015-08-02T00:39:51.528-07:00It makes me think of the sort of person who is ter...It makes me think of the sort of person who is terribly invasive and acts as if martyred when called on their behavior. I enjoyed the poem very much.<br />http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2015/08/beautiful-boy.htmlOrnery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-81959516804350645942015-08-01T22:08:15.652-07:002015-08-01T22:08:15.652-07:00Sumana, this a very lovely take of the prompt.Sumana, this a very lovely take of the prompt.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06682758228934966786noreply@blogger.com