tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post2127735219869191084..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-45307919613180797482014-06-30T22:17:22.279-07:002014-06-30T22:17:22.279-07:00This is magical! I am tring to sell our old uprigh...This is magical! I am tring to sell our old upright piano....maybe this can bring some luck in finding it a new home.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-56876095569338653122014-06-29T17:19:08.902-07:002014-06-29T17:19:08.902-07:00This poem sounds like bells. I love bells! This poem sounds like bells. I love bells! The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-51485478532127338042014-06-28T04:49:58.068-07:002014-06-28T04:49:58.068-07:00Well I liked best that fleeing piano-pianos are no...Well I liked best that fleeing piano-pianos are not often fleet of foot! Not like sassy lasses! K. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-66703656684402789962014-06-27T21:01:56.361-07:002014-06-27T21:01:56.361-07:00:-) The images are delightful especially that of t...:-) The images are delightful especially that of the snowy sun blowing dust bunnies. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-53093331934628122092014-06-27T19:03:12.580-07:002014-06-27T19:03:12.580-07:00Whoosh. Moving (pun intended).Whoosh. Moving (pun intended).Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-36919135242018531922014-06-27T17:20:29.183-07:002014-06-27T17:20:29.183-07:00love that you did a tanka...now I'm not the on...love that you did a tanka...now I'm not the only one who wrote Japanese style dada! :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-41474633093510526922014-06-27T12:39:53.136-07:002014-06-27T12:39:53.136-07:00When pianos flee 'tis time for all to hunker
a...When pianos flee 'tis time for all to hunker<br />a tuneless day, a carrotless bunny<br />clouds rise<br /> and stones clobber<br /><br />Nice poem!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-44953145684135386902014-06-27T12:03:12.021-07:002014-06-27T12:03:12.021-07:00Sassy lass sashayed
Tring ling bring dring sing s...Sassy lass sashayed<br /><br />Tring ling bring dring sing song sing... is what I loved.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-35621673330402241122014-06-27T10:20:22.352-07:002014-06-27T10:20:22.352-07:00loved it..ants chasing football tooth..perfect sum...loved it..ants chasing football tooth..perfect sumanaArathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-90945024699421043192014-06-27T10:20:21.912-07:002014-06-27T10:20:21.912-07:00loved it..ants chasing football tooth..perfect sum...loved it..ants chasing football tooth..perfect sumanaArathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-26167677815452758022014-06-27T10:12:40.204-07:002014-06-27T10:12:40.204-07:00Perfect dada! One can really go many directions. N...Perfect dada! One can really go many directions. Nicely Sumana!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-75544731352697668002014-06-27T09:59:19.394-07:002014-06-27T09:59:19.394-07:00Very fun and on point. You included sound, rhyme a...Very fun and on point. You included sound, rhyme and, of course, a bit of disconnect. Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-25062845910699364362014-06-27T09:21:28.624-07:002014-06-27T09:21:28.624-07:00Excellent use of form, and bang on with the prompt...Excellent use of form, and bang on with the prompt. Like Brian, I zeroed in on the line /the snowy sun blew bunnies/ which innocently creates quite ribald imagery, & adds to the fun--having fun with this prompt was the order of the day. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-35955731980065088352014-06-27T07:50:45.593-07:002014-06-27T07:50:45.593-07:00That 4th line made me smile.. love this one..That 4th line made me smile.. love this one..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-32314935176455413652014-06-27T07:19:50.803-07:002014-06-27T07:19:50.803-07:00haha...that is fun...thanks for the smile..off for...haha...that is fun...thanks for the smile..off for a match with the ants now...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-47148562507496261602014-06-27T07:12:17.769-07:002014-06-27T07:12:17.769-07:00Dadaist and so poetic at the same time! You did we...Dadaist and so poetic at the same time! You did well, Sumana.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-32489149725872536642014-06-27T05:38:19.115-07:002014-06-27T05:38:19.115-07:00Smiled at your lovely dada poem!Smiled at your lovely dada poem!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-34603156661663389672014-06-27T04:07:34.992-07:002014-06-27T04:07:34.992-07:00haha...i love it..it made me smile....
i think the...haha...i love it..it made me smile....<br />i think the sun blowing bunnies is my fav...haBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-14809305948811982682014-06-27T03:37:10.157-07:002014-06-27T03:37:10.157-07:00I sing song along with you ~ Very dadaist tanka, ...I sing song along with you ~ Very dadaist tanka, smiles !Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-89084482686281605092014-06-27T01:00:34.029-07:002014-06-27T01:00:34.029-07:00Tee-hee, jing-a-lee, you made my day as I sashay a...Tee-hee, jing-a-lee, you made my day as I sashay away...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-6031599311743271772014-06-26T23:46:06.022-07:002014-06-26T23:46:06.022-07:00That's DadeliciousThat's Dadeliciousvivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.com