tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post5075460085533313587..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: Thirst (A Tanka)Sumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-55080197210393237532015-06-03T22:10:06.680-07:002015-06-03T22:10:06.680-07:00this is so perfect...reminds me of someone whose j...this is so perfect...reminds me of someone whose just sitting down to write...an invisible shower of words falling from the ceiling. Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-45577857138473550202015-06-02T13:22:25.437-07:002015-06-02T13:22:25.437-07:00This is really beautiful, Sumana :)This is really beautiful, Sumana :)Toriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10570179609915990220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-51760826457701883322015-06-02T11:06:56.719-07:002015-06-02T11:06:56.719-07:00I admire the shift in that third line, from heron ...I admire the shift in that third line, from heron to the poet's words ~ A lovely tanka Sumana ~ Wishing you a happy week ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-489878322771498062015-06-02T08:47:36.199-07:002015-06-02T08:47:36.199-07:00Sumana,
Lovely calm words from your your poem..Pe...Sumana,<br /><br />Lovely calm words from your your poem..Perhaps the thirst is connected to that heat wave in India at present...Stay cool!<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-54823570740369604762015-06-02T05:48:05.961-07:002015-06-02T05:48:05.961-07:00Your words paint a beautiful picture.
Thanks for ...Your words paint a beautiful picture.<br /><br />Thanks for visiting my blog.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-31676497319838901762015-06-01T21:49:08.317-07:002015-06-01T21:49:08.317-07:00The picture that it evokes is so beautiful!!The picture that it evokes is so beautiful!!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-22932706541550472772015-06-01T16:38:35.555-07:002015-06-01T16:38:35.555-07:00Thank God for the heron. Nature's beauty cuts...Thank God for the heron. Nature's beauty cuts through despondency.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-32689784227430944182015-06-01T16:17:18.068-07:002015-06-01T16:17:18.068-07:00Gemstones and natural beauty!Gemstones and natural beauty!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-77870084207839437822015-06-01T11:51:46.699-07:002015-06-01T11:51:46.699-07:00Wonderful words painting a beautiful picture.
ZQWonderful words painting a beautiful picture.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-27625141204887184812015-06-01T09:13:12.701-07:002015-06-01T09:13:12.701-07:00The white heron and the poet offer such beauty and...The white heron and the poet offer such beauty and respite. <br />Thank you SumanaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-21909447550360810032015-06-01T08:00:59.567-07:002015-06-01T08:00:59.567-07:00Beautiful! Esp. I love 'Crystal shower of word...Beautiful! Esp. I love 'Crystal shower of words' humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-13484350337340774132015-06-01T05:48:54.028-07:002015-06-01T05:48:54.028-07:00Thirst can be viewed in so many ways ... lovely ta...Thirst can be viewed in so many ways ... lovely take :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-7220547765098263772015-06-01T04:31:07.104-07:002015-06-01T04:31:07.104-07:00Loved the tanka, and the image you used with it :)...Loved the tanka, and the image you used with it :) Nature, as GL Meisner says above, is indeed, inspiring.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-78348955298641747462015-06-01T04:06:09.170-07:002015-06-01T04:06:09.170-07:00Nature is inspiring. Love the contrast between the...Nature is inspiring. Love the contrast between the water in the world and the desert within.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-68298412924825265572015-05-31T15:49:46.639-07:002015-05-31T15:49:46.639-07:00We quench our thirst in words and images--beautifu...We quench our thirst in words and images--beautifully said!!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-68855096851610779062015-05-31T15:48:46.223-07:002015-05-31T15:48:46.223-07:00nice and dainty spread of images in this one. me ...nice and dainty spread of images in this one. me likes them all!!!Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-6513799883782705742015-05-31T15:16:20.001-07:002015-05-31T15:16:20.001-07:00And that could be a great motivation to continue w...And that could be a great motivation to continue writing Sumana. totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-26014400229172144132015-05-31T15:03:14.772-07:002015-05-31T15:03:14.772-07:00Exquisite. There is such a simple elegance to thi...Exquisite. There is such a simple elegance to this nuanced moment caught in lovely contemplation. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-6289008370697116472015-05-31T13:08:23.471-07:002015-05-31T13:08:23.471-07:00Cool and refreshing words :-)Cool and refreshing words :-)C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-5226109336590613652015-05-31T12:56:41.448-07:002015-05-31T12:56:41.448-07:00This poem glides along with the water in the pond....This poem glides along with the water in the pond....I love the feel of 'Liquid emerald pond'.<br /><br />Donna@LivingFromHappinessDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13420133886162844400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-68219604703746730222015-05-31T11:31:45.880-07:002015-05-31T11:31:45.880-07:00Oh I love this and wish we all would receive a cry...Oh I love this and wish we all would receive a crystal shower of words. I really need one.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-50563344785527133182015-05-31T10:44:58.341-07:002015-05-31T10:44:58.341-07:00So beautiful, the white heron and the poet's d...So beautiful, the white heron and the poet's desert heart.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-69472410780370071492015-05-31T10:02:18.924-07:002015-05-31T10:02:18.924-07:00I was about to quote the same line SuyashJ chose. ...I was about to quote the same line SuyashJ chose. It holds so many sounds, images... there is even the feeling of the slick words coating the shoulders. Wonderful! Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-14429065214580158082015-05-31T09:47:22.401-07:002015-05-31T09:47:22.401-07:00I wish that those crystal showers would shower dow...I wish that those crystal showers would shower down more often!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-82035807024240213972015-05-31T07:17:57.847-07:002015-05-31T07:17:57.847-07:00'crystal shower of words' ... loving that ...'crystal shower of words' ... loving that metaphorSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.com