tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post5347683387540699803..comments2023-09-19T05:00:33.470-07:00Comments on vision: I Took You For GrantedSumana Royhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-50217554813172519802016-04-28T07:14:20.294-07:002016-04-28T07:14:20.294-07:00Excellent take on this sad piece of news!
Even you...Excellent take on this sad piece of news!<br />Even you carried song, In your pulsating throat<br />Even you!"...poignant!Tarang Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-65224120931681161112016-04-11T21:18:41.943-07:002016-04-11T21:18:41.943-07:00I too miss them like anything!
In my recent visit ...I too miss them like anything!<br />In my recent visit to Shillong I saw them and you cant imagine how happy I was to see them after years!<br />I pity Today's generation they miss so many things, yet think that they are more lucky? than us! PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09777057015005418560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-13770781619784562622016-04-11T09:33:14.708-07:002016-04-11T09:33:14.708-07:00The little birds are often ignored but I hope I wi...The little birds are often ignored but I hope I will always hear and see them on my bike rides. I loved your line about "Those man-made iron giants" being in the way. Thank you for opening my eyes.Bekkie Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300001421561443693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-66615397022205789532016-04-11T08:02:14.354-07:002016-04-11T08:02:14.354-07:00It seems everything we do, kills something....mayb...It seems everything we do, kills something....maybe not a bad way to go?annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-33950344712125211572016-04-11T07:05:39.743-07:002016-04-11T07:05:39.743-07:00Very realistic poem.Very realistic poem.Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325697671806865458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-26103750610624278632016-04-11T05:27:43.189-07:002016-04-11T05:27:43.189-07:00Sad indeed!! Sometimes we don't miss / notice...Sad indeed!! Sometimes we don't miss / notice until it is (almost) too late.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-2048171874809315812016-04-10T13:39:56.445-07:002016-04-10T13:39:56.445-07:00Oh dear--very sad . And in India, there's the...Oh dear--very sad . And in India, there's the pollution too--well, everywhere. Very sweet poem. Thanks. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-43131305839233306612016-04-10T12:07:11.053-07:002016-04-10T12:07:11.053-07:00This poem's tone is one of longing and beautif...This poem's tone is one of longing and beautifully spilled love for these creatures. I love this part:<br /><br />"I pray to dawn<br />To send me this feathery ball of life<br />To sing and dance"<br /><br />Beautiful. Thank you, for writing!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-19165976073070459962016-04-10T05:03:15.170-07:002016-04-10T05:03:15.170-07:00Oh how awful! I wasn't aware of this happening...Oh how awful! I wasn't aware of this happening. My neighborhood is alive with sparrow song and I'd miss the cheeky things if they suddenly disappeared. Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-66112104446954767492016-04-10T03:37:40.989-07:002016-04-10T03:37:40.989-07:00It is quite evident in my world that the number of...It is quite evident in my world that the number of sparrows are few. They are hardly the common sparrow anymore. More common are magpies. I did not know about this reason for the diminishing sparrows. An interesting poem.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-39107322173712545272016-04-09T23:33:24.134-07:002016-04-09T23:33:24.134-07:00What a sad story. From the evidence in my garden, ...What a sad story. From the evidence in my garden, sparrows are in abundance still.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-44301036254727229812016-04-09T23:14:44.563-07:002016-04-09T23:14:44.563-07:00Oh I have not heard about that aspect.. Poor sparr...Oh I have not heard about that aspect.. Poor sparrows.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-38929688756750512282016-04-09T22:54:41.847-07:002016-04-09T22:54:41.847-07:00AmenAmenmagiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-31171745935181349782016-04-09T22:37:34.555-07:002016-04-09T22:37:34.555-07:00This is so sad.. I feel for those poor delicate cr...This is so sad.. I feel for those poor delicate creatures...Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5867053657182353336.post-57453600364500527962016-04-09T20:59:25.325-07:002016-04-09T20:59:25.325-07:00Oh, poor sparrows. Everything is struggling in thi...Oh, poor sparrows. Everything is struggling in this man-made disaster.........Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com