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Monday, 23 September 2013

For : Haiku Heights
Day 24 Sept
Prompt : Strive

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STRIVE

I strive, my limbs bleed

I wear crown of thorn for you

Peace is elusive

14 comments:

Locomente23 September 2013 at 22:29
I loved this haiku..
Nice point!
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Sumana Roy24 September 2013 at 03:58
thanks Satya..........
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Balqis DBJ24 September 2013 at 04:15
There's beauty in the sadness of this Haiku.The message is so clearly conveyed. Very nicely written! :)
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Anonymous24 September 2013 at 08:09
Powerfully moving, Sumana. Beautiful, really.
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Ella24 September 2013 at 09:10

This is beautiful and haunting!
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Amrit Sinha24 September 2013 at 11:56
Powerful piece ... loved it !!!
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Gillena Cox24 September 2013 at 12:44
Have a nice Wednesday

much love...
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Grace24 September 2013 at 16:40
Indeed peace is elusive ~ Lovely share ~
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