Monday, 30 September 2013


For : Haiku Heights
        Day 30 Sept.
Prompt : Crooked





CROOKED

Crooked smile on lips
Mind engaged in vicious scheme
Soul chuckles in glee

Sleuth’s crooked head work
Takes up a straight forward course
Crook’s caught red handed

 

           
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24 comments:

  1. Panchali30 September 2013 at 08:14

    The set reminds me of Mr Homes...Very nicely done! Please check your settings...I am posting thru the preview box...

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    1. Eileen T O'Neill .....30 September 2013 at 09:08

      Sumana,

      I too am having problems leaving a comment. My reply might be linked together with that of Panchali...

      Liked your words, which seem to conclude that one cannot get away with these crimes forever...Something gives the crime away..

      Eileen O'Neill
      http://etherealawakenings.blogspot.co.uk/

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    2. Sumana Roy30 September 2013 at 09:52

      thanks Panchalidi and Eileen .... let me see what's wrong with the comment box again...) :

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  2. Anonymous30 September 2013 at 11:54

    Hooray for the hero! Nice story in few words.

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  3. alan170430 September 2013 at 14:39

    Vicious scheme - Love that line really makes it come alive

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  4. rallentanda30 September 2013 at 15:52

    Sherlock Holmes analogy is good.Thanks for your visits during September.

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    1. Sumana Roy1 October 2013 at 04:27

      September Heights was great.......thanks Rallentanda...

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  5. Brian Miller30 September 2013 at 17:28

    ha. nice plays on crooked...and if you are willing to cross the line
    you got to be willing to pay the time....

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  6. TALON30 September 2013 at 19:28

    This was wicked crooked good. :)

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  7. Locomente30 September 2013 at 21:19

    Nice one...
    And Sumana... Taking this opportunity for visiting my blog regularly and feeding with motivating comments...

    Alas! Gonna miss the September Heights a lot!!!

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    1. Sumana Roy1 October 2013 at 04:35

      me too Satya.......going to miss all those scintillating words of you and others.........sigh....

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  8. Vandana Sharma1 October 2013 at 04:02

    so much to say with a few words:)

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    1. Sumana Roy1 October 2013 at 04:38

      ah that's the fun of haiku Vandana.......can't tell how much i enjoyed and learned this whole month.....now i'm going to miss it........sigh...

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  9. Magical Mystical Teacher1 October 2013 at 04:54

    I try to avoid the people with crooked smiles!

    Crooked Ways

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    1. Sumana Roy1 October 2013 at 05:30

      that's very wise of you MMT :D.........thanks for the visit :)

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  10. Unknown2 October 2013 at 08:23

    teasing smile of a crooked
    nice

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  11. Sumana Roy4 October 2013 at 06:25

    Thank you .....

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  12. Madeleine Begun Kane7 October 2013 at 20:52

    Clever haiku!

    Madeleine Begun Kane

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