Monday, 30 September 2013


For : Haiku Heights
        Day 30 Sept.
Prompt : Crooked





CROOKED

Crooked smile on lips
Mind engaged in vicious scheme
Soul chuckles in glee

Sleuth’s crooked head work
Takes up a straight forward course
Crook’s caught red handed

 

           
courtesy :amazon.com


25 comments:

  1. The set reminds me of Mr Homes...Very nicely done! Please check your settings...I am posting thru the preview box...

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    1. Sumana,

      I too am having problems leaving a comment. My reply might be linked together with that of Panchali...

      Liked your words, which seem to conclude that one cannot get away with these crimes forever...Something gives the crime away..

      Eileen O'Neill
      http://etherealawakenings.blogspot.co.uk/

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    2. thanks Panchalidi and Eileen .... let me see what's wrong with the comment box again...) :

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  2. Hooray for the hero! Nice story in few words.

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  3. Vicious scheme - Love that line really makes it come alive

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  4. Sherlock Holmes analogy is good.Thanks for your visits during September.

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    1. September Heights was great.......thanks Rallentanda...

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  5. ha. nice plays on crooked...and if you are willing to cross the line
    you got to be willing to pay the time....

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    1. how true :)........thanks Brian....

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  6. This was wicked crooked good. :)

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  7. Nice one...
    And Sumana... Taking this opportunity for visiting my blog regularly and feeding with motivating comments...

    Alas! Gonna miss the September Heights a lot!!!

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    1. me too Satya.......going to miss all those scintillating words of you and others.........sigh....

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  8. so much to say with a few words:)

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    1. ah that's the fun of haiku Vandana.......can't tell how much i enjoyed and learned this whole month.....now i'm going to miss it........sigh...

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    1. that's very wise of you MMT :D.........thanks for the visit :)

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