Thursday, 26 September 2013


For Verse First : We are Interconnected

                        
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INTERCONNECTED

A sage of our land once said

Even if all our attempts end in failure

Thoughts will not fail

These subtle waves will find

Their receiver and manifest

With all their might


We are so interconnected


Ah let this world be filled

With pure thoughts

Let this be the constant

Prayer of my soul


 

22 comments:

  1. Your thoughts are so pure and they speak about your true soul. But my dear this world is very harsh, it never cares about good people. Good people always struggle.

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    1. thanks Vandana for sharing your valuable thoughts........we live in hope :)

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  2. nice...i like the use of the waves as it does ripple out finding its place...it comes down to what we are sending out...we are interconnected that is for sure...

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    1. this is absolutely true...thanks for the comment.....

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  3. I like this very much. Even though thoughts fail one time, perhaps the next time (in the next wave) there will be an attempt that is a success. A fine philosophy, showing that everything works toward good...eventually.

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    1. you are right , there will always be a next time.... .........thanks Mary for sharing your wonderful thoughts :)

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  4. with pure thoughts - what a wonderful line, if we all thought the best of each other, loved unconditionally. This is a lovely poem.

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    1. Thanks Alan for your nice comment :)

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  5. Sumana - this is exactly it - what being interconnected really means - the waves of our peaceful thoughts connecting and making a difference, even though we may fail to see it. AWESOME write! I so love it!

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    1. thanks Sherry......you have said it very nicely... :)

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  6. What a wonder filled constant prayer it is!
    Beautiful

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    1. Thank you Ella for your golden words :)

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  7. This is my favorite contribution today. You hit the nail on the head. You touched my heart.

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2013/09/26/true/

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    1. thank you Kim for your inspiring words .......it was such a wonderful prompt.........

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  8. Sumana,

    Having a connection to seek solace and comfort is most encouraging. We all need this reassurance...

    Eileen

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    1. Thanks Eileen for the beautiful enlightening words.......

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  9. freedom of thought - peaceful thought - a gentling of the world would happen... obviously there is not enough of it.

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  10. yes.......you've put it very nicely ........a gentling of the world would happen.....thanks Margaret for your precious comment...

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  11. Collective consciousness is a powerful thing - yes, lets think peace.

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    1. yes and we know it will bear fruit one day.........thanks Suzy for sharing your thoughts....

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