For Verse First : We are Interconnected
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INTERCONNECTED
A sage of our land once said
Even if all our attempts end in failure
Thoughts will not fail
These subtle waves will find
Their receiver and manifest
With all their might
We are so interconnected
Ah let this world be filled
With pure thoughts
Let this be the constant
Prayer of my soul
Your thoughts are so pure and they speak about your true soul. But my dear this world is very harsh, it never cares about good people. Good people always struggle.
ReplyDeletethanks Vandana for sharing your valuable thoughts........we live in hope :)
Deletenice...i like the use of the waves as it does ripple out finding its place...it comes down to what we are sending out...we are interconnected that is for sure...
ReplyDeletethis is absolutely true...thanks for the comment.....
DeleteI like this very much. Even though thoughts fail one time, perhaps the next time (in the next wave) there will be an attempt that is a success. A fine philosophy, showing that everything works toward good...eventually.
ReplyDeleteyou are right , there will always be a next time.... .........thanks Mary for sharing your wonderful thoughts :)
Deletewith pure thoughts - what a wonderful line, if we all thought the best of each other, loved unconditionally. This is a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alan for your nice comment :)
DeleteSumana - this is exactly it - what being interconnected really means - the waves of our peaceful thoughts connecting and making a difference, even though we may fail to see it. AWESOME write! I so love it!
ReplyDeletethanks Sherry......you have said it very nicely... :)
DeleteWhat a wonder filled constant prayer it is!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful
Thank you Ella for your golden words :)
Deletethanks for dropping by...:)
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite contribution today. You hit the nail on the head. You touched my heart.
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thank you Kim for your inspiring words .......it was such a wonderful prompt.........
DeleteSumana,
ReplyDeleteHaving a connection to seek solace and comfort is most encouraging. We all need this reassurance...
Eileen
Thanks Eileen for the beautiful enlightening words.......
Deletefreedom of thought - peaceful thought - a gentling of the world would happen... obviously there is not enough of it.
ReplyDeleteyes.......you've put it very nicely ........a gentling of the world would happen.....thanks Margaret for your precious comment...
ReplyDeleteCollective consciousness is a powerful thing - yes, lets think peace.
ReplyDeleteyes and we know it will bear fruit one day.........thanks Suzy for sharing your thoughts....
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