Wednesday, 4 September 2013






 RUSTY HOME

What an amazing world…….
I’ve never looked at it in this way
Cubes, spheres, cylinders all around
Pulsating with life
Drapes whispering stories of labor
On built in wood stand my angels
Carrying love, sigh, wisdom in their bosom
And wonders will never cease
Rainbow has struck the garden
The trees have metamorphosed
 Into huge bouquet
Amidst all these
Time’s chuckle is heard
In murmur of dry petals and leaves
His fiery smiles hang
 On squares and cubes and spheres

For : Poetry Jam : Rust
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33 comments:

  1. Laurie Kolp4 September 2013 at 10:01

    I love time's chuckle.

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  2. Sumana Roy4 September 2013 at 10:37


    time is always the winner...so...

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  3. Mary4 September 2013 at 11:00

    Yes, what an amazing world this is in so many ways!! I like picturing how the trees have metamorphosed into a huge bouquet.

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  4. Sumana Roy4 September 2013 at 11:24


    thanks for the comments Mary.... :)

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  5. Vandana Sharma4 September 2013 at 11:50

    memories en crafted. (i saw your name shortlisted at raedleaf poetry competition:) congrats!!)

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    1. Sumana Roy4 September 2013 at 21:43


      thanks Vandana for your visit..i think there is a little bit mistaken identity problem here..i am not sumana roy of raedleaf poetry...she lives in jalpaiguri. we share the same name only.

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  6. Anonymous4 September 2013 at 11:58

    "What an amazing world……./I’ve never looked at it in this way"- It is not always easy to look at the world we know with new yes but you poem shows that the gain is ours if we succeed.

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  7. Brian Miller4 September 2013 at 13:32

    nice...really cool visuals and it is a pretty amazing world at times....and there is so much beauty when we look for it....

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky4 September 2013 at 14:04

    I love the imagery in this piece, especially the trees forming themselves into a bouquet! Cool.

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  9. Unknown4 September 2013 at 17:34

    Your attention to detail and description is really effective. Nice addition to the group. Thanks for sharing.

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  10. Grace4 September 2013 at 17:45

    I like this part:

    Time’s chuckle is heard
    In murmur of dry petals and leaves

    Good one ~

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  11. Unknown4 September 2013 at 19:05

    I've been doing a creative study of time so the chuckle of Time is apropos as his hands tick tock to the last second of the year
    nicely written

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    1. Sumana Roy4 September 2013 at 21:55


      Time in His 'winged chariot' leaves nothing....thanks for the visit and your nice words..

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  12. Susan4 September 2013 at 19:57

    Pulsing, whispering, sighing,change, change, change sp mightily alive! Well might time chuckle and smile.

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    1. Sumana Roy4 September 2013 at 21:57


      thanks Susan for your words of appreciation...

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  13. TCPC4 September 2013 at 21:13

    LLoved the way you fit them into spheres and cubes. Kind of make them tangible and the feeling evolves!

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    1. Sumana Roy4 September 2013 at 21:58


      thanks Akila for your visit and nice words...

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  14. Unknown4 September 2013 at 23:19

    Loved everything about this..the shapes..the tress..so true wonders will never cease :)

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  15. Panchali5 September 2013 at 00:50

    Its the creativity in the writer that keeps the reader engrossed and captivates her thinking ...so lovely!

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  16. alan17045 September 2013 at 00:58

    This has so many levels, like a kaleidoscope of colour that changes every time you read it. It is quite captivating.

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  17. Sumana Roy5 September 2013 at 10:32


    thanks Loredana..

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  18. Jennifer Wagner5 September 2013 at 12:47

    I really like time's chuckle and your close!

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  19. Anonymous5 September 2013 at 15:25

    having recently immersed myself in Escher's art, i find myself seeing geometric form in nature far more than i used to - love your poem

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    1. Sumana Roy6 September 2013 at 04:06


      thanks for your nice words...nature has so many secrets hidden in her...... :)

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