any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Posted for Get Listed With Brendan : Moon Madness @ Real Toads
Shared with Poetry Jam where the Prompt is Refrigerator
Wow, what a great foray into the challenge -- I don't know if the "she" here is Sylvia Plath, or the writer, or some other victim of poetry, but the conceit is wonderful. Opening the cold tomb of the muses, getting blasted by what is find there, using it to refilament the moon. Loved it --
my fav part are the last couple lines the weaving of the garment by the moon...sounds rather pandora's box there in the beginning...
She has wonderful strength! Really liked how you were able to bring these 2 prompts together - not 2 that I would have thought would have been able to go together well. You proved they could!
Sumana, this is an amazing poem.The following lines are very captivating, "Just as the silver threads of the moonKeep on weaving radiant garmentsFor black night."
Love the . . . thousand split-tongues danced and the silver threads of a moon to weave garments.
Perhaps if we worked with all perceived enemies like this, unperturbed, we'd find ways to weave together.
"She bore the wild attackUnperturbedAnd became a candleShe wanted to wrap themMelt them, make them glow"Beautiful thought there... something to aspire to but it is hard.
The image of moon weaving radiant garments is wonderful. Well-penned.-HA
I most love the moon weaving radiant garments. Wonderful!
I like the imagery of becoming a candle , very positive thoughts in that numbing cold attack ~
Mystical. I liked how she morphs into the candle. And the snake imagery is mesmerizing. Great write. :)
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