Wednesday, 9 April 2014


 

APRIL-9
                                        courtesy : Google image



She tiptoes
With a faint smile
       And
Butterfly blooms
Blooms buzz
Nectar’s brimful
     Then
Petals brown
She’s scorched
 Breathless
      It’s
All a moment’s glow

Posted for Words Count With Mama Zen @ Real Toads


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8 comments:

  1. Maude Lynn9 April 2014 at 11:05

    "She’s scorched
    Breathless"

    I really like that.

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  2. Brian Miller9 April 2014 at 14:28

    smiles...yes she is quick to change for sure
    i do love the butterflies....

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  3. Wendy Bourke9 April 2014 at 14:54

    "a moment’s glow" - profound: made me stop and take in a moment.

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  4. Sherry Blue Sky9 April 2014 at 15:11

    I, too, love the "scorched breathless" and the "all a moment's glow"

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  5. Susan9 April 2014 at 16:30

    Oh! to tiptoe with you in the moment! What a delight.

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  6. Margaret9 April 2014 at 20:01

    Breathless - nice.

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  7. Susie Clevenger9 April 2014 at 20:03

    "She's scorched breathless" I love that....gorgeous piece!

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  8. Yvonne Osborne10 April 2014 at 03:41

    Nice imagery. She does indeed tiptoe. I wish she'd rush in!

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