THE MOON
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| courtesy : google image |
When I see you
Only sense of
vision
Remains
Words vaporize
A mystic
emptiness
Resides
That soft,
silver flow
Cooling me down
Spreads
Darkness melts
away
The sterling
night
Meditates
Posted for Alan’s
prompt The Moon @ Poetry Jam
Yes, the moon certainly has a calming affect on us. Thank you for this.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. This poem leaves me with a sense of stillness and peacefulness, Sumana.
ReplyDeletenice....yes, our eternal night light...giving us direction...and comfort from the heavens...nice take....
ReplyDeleteThere is a real peace and serenity in your words, great poem.
ReplyDeleteThe moon has a calming effect on the mind and this is the reason many beautiful lines bloom at night
ReplyDeleteLovely description of the peace and calm found in looking at the moon sometimes. Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteI like how the moon, darkness and the readers all seem to merge in your serene words, Sumana!
ReplyDeleteAfter warm summer days, I love " That soft, silver flow
ReplyDeleteCooling me down" physically and mentally.
A lovely, serene, transcendent piece, Sumana. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love "the sterling night meditates"....so serene.
ReplyDelete:) the moon makes us speechless with its timeless beauty.
ReplyDeleteGoes perfectly with the Pic .. lovely
ReplyDeleteBikram
Oh wow! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove a good moon lite night that mystic atmosphere, nice one
ReplyDeleteI like that 'words vaporize' - what an image ~
ReplyDeleteLoved it Suman..i liked the closing lines..
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