any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Words can be intrusive and relentless. I like how your mind seems to have found peace, if only for a precious moment.
sometimes that peace can be so fleeting...those moments though can be such a relief....words can def be a powerful force...
It is always good when one's inert mind can be filled with peace. Those moments bring bliss. I really like your use of form, Sumana. Not easy.
Beautifull... its such a good form... reads just like a song.. maybe someday you shoould put it in some music... :)
I've never seen that form. It has a nice flow.
new to me, thanks for sharing the notes to this formhave a nice Wednesdaymuch love...
I love it when the world shines in an unearthly light....beautiful!
Beautifully written and i love the form and the emotion.
Lovely and I like the way you took this in a positive direction. Neat photo too.
Being alone allows to search within us to find the peace we so often seek outside and which other people make it hard to find. Lovely poem!
Words give - but they can also take away. Beautifully written - and skillfully executed as to the form you've taken on. Well done!
Words fizzing in unceasing flow..like the ocean nice concept
Finding peace gives peace. I enjoyed reading it. Nicely written with great meanings.
Beautiful. I love the way it is written. It's true that words can sometimes be annoying and not leave us a single moment of peace of mind... Those moments are like shooting stars and have to be seized when they happen. I'm glad you shared this wonderful poem! I really enjoyed reading it.
Good use of the form!
Wow Sumana that was amazing. So true that peace comes to inert minds - great wisdom there.
Often, words do much measure up to the awesomeness of nature. However, a mind at peace can soak in the glory even more. Nice write. :-)
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