any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
i love mornings... and you capture the magic beautifullly...those first sunrays, purple clouds... i will ride my bike to work tomorrow...into the sunrise...smiles
The pledge of the morning.. the promises in a new dawn.. I really love that. really...
love the pink clouds as her shy words written on the sky...what a beautiful morning rising up from your words...
This is lovely, Sumana. You have really evoked the birth of a mountain and found a wonderful photo to illustrate your concept as well.
What a beautiful beginning if day you have captured, Sumana! I like the image of the pink clouds being shy words too.
My favorite time of the day ~ Love the opening lines ~
wonderful sumana!! and you beat me... i couldnt do less than 40!! :)
We tied at 35, cool. like Brian, I loved lines /pink clouds are her shy words/. Now retired, I do enjoy my mornings, but midnight oil for writing, watching movies pleases me too.
What lines you have there! The pink clouds! Mmmmm! And accordingly every line that follows. Beautiful poetry.
I enjoyed a lot of the phrasing you use here ... icy darkness, river dream.
Wavy hands catchesThe warmthWhile icy darknessFades and hides - my favorite; great write
This aurora, personified dawn, is welcome to visit me whenever she can!
This is beautiful Sumana. Makes me want to rise early to catch those pink hues, see the pledge written in the sky. But gotta be honest I usually sleep through it. Sad. But I do catch the sunsets.
A gorgeous glittering poem - perfect.
Beautiful. I was out when the sun appeared this morning, on my misty lake... You captured it.
Magnificent! and outstanding piece.I like this poem of yours very much. :)
Beautiful all but that ending is so stunning.
The feeling is so serene and yet the visuals are stunning.
As a morning person I so connected with the images you create Sumana, Very well done.
Pink clouds are her shy words. Lovely
This is a lovely description of sunrise. Simply beautiful!
Stunning poem...pledges to shine!
Just beautiful Sumana.
I love the optimism of this.
sweet morning..beautiful lines...Sumana:)
"The morning slowlyPledges to shine" Your words capture the optimism of a new day.
That was an enjoyable picture of the girl and the boy. It reveals an essential thing, the infinite darkness in the background. Very well done!
" While icy darkness Fades and hides . . " love that description.
The morning slowlyPledges to shineThere is hope yet for those who care. Nicely Sumana!Hank
Pledges of the morning..a fresh start a new day..lovely
Your poem matches the picture very well.
Beautiful. I love the idea of the clouds being her words. It definitely sounds like a promising morning.
so beautiful..... :-)
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