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The mountain
playfully blows the sun bubble
That shares its joy
with the lake
The lake
ecstatic by the warm touch
Shivers and
plays her magical wavy notes
That catch the
milk white ballerina
Who shakes her
fairy wings
And dances and
dances and dances
The joy ripples
spread farther and farther
I sail my happy
dream in the wave
With the hope of
reaching the land
Where it is most
needed…………..
Posted for Susan’s Midweek Motif ~ Happiness @ PU
smiles...a fantastical dream...and playful...love the personification...and the magic that you put into this...it made me happy too...smiles.
ReplyDeletesuch a beautiful interconnected happiness.
ReplyDeleteThis makes me smile!
ReplyDeleteSumana I really like the magic in this. It's like a happy fairytale from nature. I love the last line, it reveals your heart.
ReplyDeleteThe dance of happiness and the magic of life.
ReplyDeleteSumana, your poem is magical just like a swan. I was happy at the end of it. The wings part made me smile especially. :) Good job!
ReplyDeleteYes, I hope your happy dream sails right to the shore where it is most needed!
ReplyDeleteA simple joy to watch, even better to imagine.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery of the very first line is just wonderful..'sun bubble' ..:-)
ReplyDeleteA happy happy poem it is... :-)
"ekTi dhaner shisher opor ekTi shishir bindu'' ...ei line Taai mone eshechhilo lekhar somoy...glad that you identified the connection..
I was here yesterday but got waylaid by the picture, trying to find it on google, but couldn't. Would love to know who took the photograph or where you found it.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, sorry I'm late visiting: I forgot to come back.
Lovely sentiment in your subtle lines.
oh what a happy happy dream... sometimes ignorance like they say is bliss!!
ReplyDeleteindeed it is a happy dream Sumana:)
ReplyDeleteI love the way this poem ends, bringing this happiness to the world that needs it. Such a joyful poem!
ReplyDelete"The lake ecstatic by the warm touch
ReplyDeleteShivers and plays her magical wavy notes'... so many beautiful images.
The bird as a milk white ballerina shaking her wings is a nice image.
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