any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Love your play with clouds, esp. the dancing part - what a fun! :)x
Ah, seeing those playful clouds swaying and beckoning cannot help but make a person happy & even dance! (Smiles) And I don't think we will ever know what clouds know!
the clouds come in all forms....some playful...some to obscure....i would rather the playful anyday...smiles.
Clouds can be playful or frightening. Often your perception depends on where you are and what you are doing.
This is wonderful, Sumana!
Luv your rebuke of the "naughty clouds" have a good WednesdayMuch love...
I had to rebuke them Gillena..they entered my house and flooded...now we are okay of course :)
Several aspects of clouds and the feelings they bring here. I especially like the honeyed conversation between the bee and lotus.
This really sings a song and reminds me of an ode. Very nicely done.
Enjoyed your personification of those naughty clouds.
Those naughty clouds...just shoo them away until the sun comes out again ~ I don't think we will ever know them, smiles ~
There is a feeling of turmoil here
I'm glad the cloudy mischief is over for you!
A good take on this theme, Sumana. I enjoyed the various aspects of mood you create through the description of the clouds.
I love the happiness of your poem...
I love how you brought clouds to life here Sumana....lovely! :-)
feel good poem, I am happy after reading thisBeyond Clouds
Interesting take on the prompt, I really enjoyed reading it...smiles!
Sumana,Clouds are really quite mischievous, with how they change or impact on our time and on our plans. Loved the dancing version of them!!!Eileen
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