any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Hard to choose which one sometimes, truth or reflection of reality ~ I also like the two sides of ocean, both moving & in repose~I love the meditations Sumana ~ Thanks for linking up with Sunday's Challenge and wishing you Happy Sunday ~
This is like the feeling of seeing something beautiful in nature, and sometimes not knowing which is better. This is so when dealing with things like different seasons or weather. They also affect our mood and thoughts.
Which side of the mirror is the best really... Best they are united.
They say truth is stranger from fiction. Your poem is a reflection of this fact. Beautifully executed :DLoved it :Dxoxo
This is a thoughtful response, Sumana. It is hard to choose between two equally beautiful scenes.
I nearly chose that line myself! I think your words are wonderful.
This is brilliant, Sumana! "One is Truth yet hard to bear"....so accurate - I love the "dancing feet" of the ocean, but feel the weight on "no repose." This gem really makes one think! So well done.
This is stunning!
frankly i do not know which phase of your poem i like better, it is such a well woven piece, to un-strand it would be a grave wronghave a lovely Sundaymuch love
So much inspiration here! Inner vision of the ocean's waves as feet... Mountains as frozen waves (how on earth have I missed that all this time?)... This is inspirational and so, so beautiful!
so many decisions in life
Sumana, your poem is lovely, breath-taking. So well done
This is great--you've helped me see something I see every day in a new way.
Sometimes the choice depends on the moment of life that surrounds thought. Both of these are so beautiful.
The hard choices we face so well said...
I love the dancing feet of the ocean line....blooming sum...gorgeous as always!
Beautiful. I would be hard pressed to choose, too.Thanks for your kind comment.
Lovely! You've beautifully articulated the beauty to be found in nature, and wrapped it like a gift. The insight in your words, imbuing layers and nuance to the poem's theme.
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your valuable thoughts.........