Some doubt about faith is so human, & yet "must be" needs to be uttered/thought, for there are spiritual forces in the Universe that carry the Truth, the keys to the kingdom. There are those among who claim to "know", that have no "doubts"; oner day beyond the veil, we'll meet them again & compare notes.
Yes.. the eyes of Yogis.. never sleep in darkness.. are wide awake in repose.. of always recovering in light that never grows old.. a spirit living forever.. in mores of now.. a life of love that is strong yet never attached to death of knowing love only grows stronger as death of other than living life..:)
I had to come back a few times to grasp your lines, starting long, and strong, then, that fading. Do we need the eyes to remain open, or in hoping so, are we no longer responsible for our fate at all? A philosophically fascinating piece.
It is a good thing our gods dont sleep and the way to heaven is always lit.
ReplyDeleteIt is so very peaceful to think that the Yogi is watching over humans as they rest.....keeping the light on, leading the way!
ReplyDeleteYes. This is very peaceful.
ReplyDeleteOur Gods always seem to leave the light one for us. Excellent thought in that! Hayes Spencer is Kanzen Sakura
ReplyDeleteGod always has a light... smiles
ReplyDeleteThere is a hesitation or skepticism in that last line that I read in the ellipses. Odd, but that's what I like most about this poem.
ReplyDeleteSome doubt about faith is so human, & yet "must be" needs to be uttered/thought, for there are spiritual forces in the Universe that carry the Truth, the keys to the kingdom. There are those among who claim to "know", that have no "doubts"; oner day beyond the veil, we'll meet them again & compare notes.
ReplyDeleteThe guidance of god is what hold us all.
ReplyDeleteI think the important the is that we believe the gods are awake.. Love that doubt in the end though. I think we need that too.
ReplyDeleteWhat the mind sees....
ReplyDeleteI hope so!
ReplyDeleteThere is comfort in knowing that the whole world is never totally asleep and that some keep the faith, or so we hope.
ReplyDeleteYes.. the eyes of Yogis.. never sleep in darkness.. are wide awake in repose.. of always recovering in light that never grows old..
ReplyDeletea spirit living forever.. in mores of now.. a life of
love that is strong yet never attached to death
of knowing love only grows
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death of other
than living life..:)
yes! the yogi's and the eyes of God, always watching. :)
ReplyDeleteFaith in a path sounds good to me...a way to live..nice..
ReplyDeleteI love how in the first part you speak with complete assurance, but in the last 2 lines, you bring in a sense of questioning and doubt.
ReplyDeleteI had to come back a few times to grasp your lines, starting long, and strong, then, that fading. Do we need the eyes to remain open, or in hoping so, are we no longer responsible for our fate at all? A philosophically fascinating piece.
ReplyDeleteTranscendent depths in these few words. A very thoughtful write.
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