Saturday, 6 June 2015

The Night Played Music



           Not a wink of sleep

The night played music with star notes

          Shy bride and her groom

 

 

Posted for Prompt 6 – Weekend Wordle # 1 @ A Prompt Each Day


               (I have used three given words marked in red)

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28 comments:

  1. X6 June 2015 at 05:07

    Ha. The night before the wedding. On the cusp of changing your life forever. I remember mine. We had a bad storm and the power went out. And I was almost arrested because of a friends stupidity.

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  2. kalpana solsi6 June 2015 at 06:49

    a beautiful poem Sumana about the hope and anxieties of a new beginning.

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  3. brudberg7 June 2015 at 00:12

    I think the stars enjoy the sight of the sweet couple.

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  4. Old Egg7 June 2015 at 00:48

    Those were days when both were nervous innocents!

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  5. J Cosmo Newbery7 June 2015 at 00:58

    No sleep, huh? Well, I wonder why?

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  6. Vandana Sharma7 June 2015 at 01:01

    emotions flowing................

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  7. Peter Coddle7 June 2015 at 01:07

    Not shy for long, I vouch. ;-)

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  8. Jae Rose7 June 2015 at 01:08

    Now that is a kind of insomnia that is good! lovely starry poem

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  9. Anonymous7 June 2015 at 01:53

    Haa.. such a sweet image! Shy brides are probably a thing of the past though :) :)

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  10. Sanaa Rizvi7 June 2015 at 02:10

    Loved this! So romantic :D

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  11. kaykuala7 June 2015 at 02:22

    Obviously many can relate to this, Sumana!

    Hank

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  12. Mary7 June 2015 at 05:14

    Even in darkness the music can be heard by the shy bride waiting for her big day.

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  13. Brother Ollie7 June 2015 at 07:04

    Very cool piece. I like the subtle imagery.

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  14. Susan7 June 2015 at 08:26

    A music to remember! Nicely done. I hate word lists, bu you handle them so that I forget they are there.

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  15. Vinay Leo R.7 June 2015 at 09:09

    Simple, sweet and a night to remember for them, I think :) Good one.

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  16. Gillena Cox7 June 2015 at 10:09

    the music of Line 2 has to be heavenly for such an auspicious event

    thanks for dropping in at my Sunday Lime

    much love...

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  17. C.C.7 June 2015 at 10:48

    Love the idea of music with star notes. Beautiful and melodic.

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  18. Donna7 June 2015 at 11:22

    Oh the first night as a wedded couple....beautiful! Sometimes we only need a few words....

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  19. Sherry Blue Sky7 June 2015 at 12:13

    So sweet, Sumana.

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  20. Torie7 June 2015 at 12:47

    This sounds so sweet!

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  21. Myrna R.7 June 2015 at 13:21

    Music with star notes, fresh love. I like this so much. Reminded me of my wedding night - about 100 years ago.

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  22. totomai7 June 2015 at 14:52

    That night will always be memorable to the newlywed. It will be a short night for me. This is really sweet, Sumana

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  23. ZQ7 June 2015 at 15:34

    Perfect! (as usual)
    ZQ

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  24. Wendy Bourke7 June 2015 at 17:06

    Delightful ... a charming bit of oh-so-human insight whimsically captured.

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  25. Anonymous7 June 2015 at 20:58

    That's a night made for gazing at stars. Music of the night made with star notes. Like that,

    Elizabeth

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  26. magiceye7 June 2015 at 22:08

    Romantic interlude!

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  27. Gen Giggles 8 June 2015 at 05:42

    That first night is a poet's muse.

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  28. humbird8 June 2015 at 09:46

    Loved those 'star notes'...perhaps bringing the power to bride and groom...

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