Wednesday, 28 August 2013

 KRISHNA

This flute player
Has been creating
Enchanting notes for
Thousands of years
  With an eager eye
For a devoted listener
It's not that no one had 
Ever heard Him
Didn't Meera leave
Her king and palace
 Only to be immersed into
That ethereal flow                                                                                                                
The Little Butter Thief
     Wants your All
Only then will He let you                                                                                      
  Hear His strain                                                                                                   
                         
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10 comments:

  1. Lisa A. Williams28 August 2013 at 13:40

    Love the sound of the flute, light and heavenly. Nice poem Sumana!

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  2. Sumana Roy28 August 2013 at 19:23


    thanks Lisa :)

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  3. Mary29 August 2013 at 10:42

    I can really visualize the flute player through your words!

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    1. Sumana Roy29 August 2013 at 20:08


      thank you Mary ..... the flute player is our dearest one :) thanks for the visit

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  4. Mary29 August 2013 at 10:43

    I am trying to comment on your "Steps" poem, but I cannot. Would you check the comment box for that one?

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  5. aspiritofsimplicity29 August 2013 at 11:25

    I had the same problem with commenting on the steps poem. I liked it very much. I enjoyed the last verse each teaching us for our final steps.

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    1. Sumana Roy29 August 2013 at 20:11


      thanks for the visit.......glad you liked the lines... oops..let me check it out

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  6. Mary29 August 2013 at 16:59

    Two other people have told me they cannot comment on your Poetry Jam poem. If you wish comments, you have to figure out what the problem is.

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    1. Sumana Roy29 August 2013 at 20:14


      i'm still in the dark... i turned off the word verification...hope it's not because of that..

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  7. Suzy31 August 2013 at 05:32

    This poem brought me great joy. Lord Krishna's bansuri is the sweetest sound in the Universe and so true that only when we give our all will He let us hear it. Beautiful.
    Suzy at Reflections of my soul

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