Sunday, 27 October 2013



Written for Mini-challenge:Masks @ Real Toads & shared with Poetry Pantry @ Poets United

MASK
I am consciousness alone
Wearing the body-mask for the time being
And watching how the Cosmic Soul
Has put on the mask of the universe
I am related to everyone and everything
I am beyond death
When the time comes
I shall cast away the mask
And be one with the Cosmic Soul

21 comments:

  1. :) So beautiful thoughts, merging with universe as one soul

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  2. This is my favourite response to the prompt. Uplifting, inspiring and beautiful. Wow!!!! You lifted me to another realm.

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  3. I agree a very uplifting and energizing response.

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  4. you are right in that connection between each of us...even as much as we try to deny it at times....and our rejoining together as one there in the end...

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  5. The collective consciousness...yes...I loved this because I think we are connected and all part of the same cosmos. Beautiful!

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  6. I specially like that ending, being one with the cosmic soul ~

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  7. I am unpacked and ready. :-)
    ZQ

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  8. A thoughtful metaphysical response to the challenge - thanks for participating and sharing this tightly penned piece ~ M

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  9. ...I am beyond death. Sounds like no mask is needed :) Very interesting poem.

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  10. Love the idea of body as mask to truth of the spirit as part of the one.

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  11. We are all related to everyone & everything ... I love the unity & harmony in your poem :)

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  12. I like how you make us aware of the connection between each and everyone of us Sumama!

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  13. It is very difficult to attain and sustain such cosmic visions.kudos.

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  14. I am related to everyone and everything... That is such a positive statement and one worth remembering.

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  15. Sumana this is just awesome. Being one with the 'cosmic soul' is unique.

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  16. thank you friends for your nice words.... :)

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  17. Wearing a mask till the end, so true, Sumana!

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  18. That's the reality of life ... very beautifully written !!!

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