Wednesday 22 January 2014

 AN EYE AND CLOUDS
Thousand white feathers
Sailing together
Each a free spirit     
Breathing benediction
The lonesome boy eyes them
Then ties them in his heart
They become his fountain of words
He writes them                                        
                                                                              
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23 comments:

  1. getting inspiration from nature:)

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  2. Sky writing, your words have wings!

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  3. and what a lovely write; have a nice Wednesday

    much love...

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  4. Looking to the clouds we can find many things. I like the line "he ties them in his heart". So many inspirations for words tied up in the heart.

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  5. What a nice message. I like thinking of clouds as feathers sailing along as free spirits. If only we humans could be as free as the clouds.... Smiles.

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  6. pretty cool bit of magic behind the writing in this ....and i am glad they helped him find his words...

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  7. I appreciate such people, who can actually see the world instead of just looking at things.

    Nice poem. <3

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  8. Yes, we can find lots to write about in the clouds.

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  9. Absolutely beautiful! "They become his fountain of words" gave me chills. Thank you for sharing!

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  10. I like the idea that clouds can be so light they evoke feathers! Very sweet poem, Sumana!

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  11. a great connection between the concrete and abstract.

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  12. White feathers - lovely, powerful image and that chilling hope. Great emotion

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  13. Love the images here. Thanks for posting.

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  14. Simply delightful reading. Loved the images.
    -HA

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  15. The feathers of freedom....definitely something to tie to one's heart...beautiful

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  16. The line: Breathing benediction - very powerful and transcending.

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  17. Sumana lovely!! The magic of clouds inspired! :)

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  18. I like the way you weave a poetic tapestry with the clouds.

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  19. ... 'breathing benediction' ... beautiful image in a lovely poem.

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  20. The story of the making of a poet. Very pretty, nice images.
    Thank you , Sumanar.
    ;;

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  21. "Breathing benediction" is a great line.

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  22. Lovely poem, I enjoyed this very much!

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