CAUSES FOR CELEBRATION
Enduring for long
Heat, pressure in the Earth’s
mantle
A diamond is born
Each birth is a dread
Snapping snowy shroud in silence
Spring pops up her head
Dumb and mute keyboard
Poets trapped in stumbling block
A line comes in dream
Posted for Susan's Mid Week Motif ~ Happy Birthday
And it is certainly time for celebration when that line comes! We are always waiting.
ReplyDeleteBravo! Three births, each a gemstone hardest of its kind. Of them all, only the diamond draws blood while all symbolize love forever.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting take on a Birthday celebrations.A diamond, a spring blossom and a line...I'll take the diamond:)
ReplyDeleteOh, I definitely like it when a line comes in a dream! I enjoyed each of your stanzas, Sumana.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully conceived!
ReplyDeleteout of pressure comes the treasure...
ReplyDeleteand thank goodness for those lines that come in the middle of the night eh?
Yes..those dream lines really do deserve a celebration! Cheers to them
ReplyDelete:) indeed a reason to celebrate
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this poem - the ending: "A line comes in dream" - Perfect!
ReplyDeleteThis is so elegant and wonderful
ReplyDeleteThis seems to have an uplifting feel to me, thank you!
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