Thursday, 20 March 2014

  

CAUSES FOR CELEBRATION

                                                      courtesy : Google image



          Enduring for long
Heat, pressure in the Earth’s mantle
           A diamond is born

         Each birth is a dread
Snapping snowy shroud in silence
         Spring pops up her head

      Dumb and mute keyboard 
Poets trapped in stumbling block
       A line comes in dream

Posted for Susan's Mid Week Motif ~ Happy Birthday

12 comments:

  1. And it is certainly time for celebration when that line comes! We are always waiting.

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  2. Bravo! Three births, each a gemstone hardest of its kind. Of them all, only the diamond draws blood while all symbolize love forever.

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  3. Very interesting take on a Birthday celebrations.A diamond, a spring blossom and a line...I'll take the diamond:)

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  4. Oh, I definitely like it when a line comes in a dream! I enjoyed each of your stanzas, Sumana.

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  5. out of pressure comes the treasure...
    and thank goodness for those lines that come in the middle of the night eh?

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  6. Yes..those dream lines really do deserve a celebration! Cheers to them

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  7. Enjoyed this poem - the ending: "A line comes in dream" - Perfect!

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  8. This is so elegant and wonderful

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  9. This seems to have an uplifting feel to me, thank you!

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