any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
What is your name?
Oh are you fire?
What is then your demand?
The polka dot sky and the Land
And pray tell me why?
I want to grow
Till I die
Posted for Margaret’s prompt A Child’s Voice @ Real Toads
It's a nice interesting poem, goes well with the image :)
I specially like this line:The polka dot sky and the LandHave a good weekend Sumana ~
The wish to grow until I die makes this a touching poem and I love the sense of wonder in it.
Mr. Linky went a little crazy … check back in a few and see if your poem is linked.. Thanks.
The conversational element is fun, and the "till I die" is just how they think… my 6 year old son wrote a poem once and the last line was something like "fell down dead" I think it was about fall leaves.
I like the personification in this poem. Very nice.
I LOVE "I want to grow till I die".
So creative form of the dialog. Kids love questioning everything...See your poem as a little play for kids by kids :)x
what an interesting last couple lines...i like the curiousity in the opening about the flamethe last couple lines caught me off guard...
You have captured the wonder of children and their questions.
who, what, when, why.... totally in the mind of a child... loved the poke-a-dot line
interesting final couplet ~
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