Friday, 18 April 2014


  
 A SONG
(April-18)
                                             courtesy : google image

 With those
Dove-alphabets
The song Written on
The azure paper
Sung by you
Is powerful
To stop    
The blood-bath
I sink my quill
In the sun-pot
Copy
Those songs
And whisper
To the wind
To take them
Far and wide

Posted for Marian’s prompt Working On That @ Real Toads

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15 comments:

  1. Marian18 April 2014 at 04:09

    ohhh, love this. "dove-alphabet." gotta get that working. :) wonderful!

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  2. Vandana Sharma18 April 2014 at 04:54

    may these songs fill everyone with harmony and joy:)

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  3. Other Mary18 April 2014 at 05:46

    This is such a beautiful extended metaphor. It gives me a feeling of peace and excitement and joy all at the same time. Love it!

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  4. Grace18 April 2014 at 06:48

    I too love the dove- aphabets ~ May we hear those songs wherever we are ~ Good one Sumana ~

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  5. magiceye18 April 2014 at 08:07

    Beautiful thought!!

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  6. Sherry Blue Sky18 April 2014 at 10:33

    This is BEAUTIFUL. I love dipping your pen in the sun pot........

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  7. Gail18 April 2014 at 12:06

    Beautiful.

    Thank you for visiting.

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  8. Margaret18 April 2014 at 12:28

    "sink my quill in the sun spot"… that is lovely! Write on!

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  9. Margaret18 April 2014 at 12:28

    sun-pot

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  10. Susie Clevenger18 April 2014 at 13:43

    Beautiful...dove-alphabet and sun-pot....I want to use both :)

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  11. Grandmother Mary18 April 2014 at 14:28

    Carrier pigeons, doves of peace and our quills in the sun-pot- Yes!

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  12. Kay L. Davies18 April 2014 at 15:46

    Like others, I love the words you've used, the phrases you've created. "quills in the sun-pot" is especially wonderful.
    K

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  13. Hannah18 April 2014 at 17:46

    This poem floats...

    Love this:

    "I sink my quill
    In the sun-pot
    Copy
    Those songs
    And whisper"

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  14. Ella18 April 2014 at 19:15

    This is gorgeous! When I see white wings I will think of your poem-
    Wow~

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  15. Krishna/കൃഷ്ണ18 April 2014 at 21:33

    Very nice poem...

    thanks

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