Friday, 18 April 2014


  
 A SONG
(April-18)
                                             courtesy : google image

 With those
Dove-alphabets
The song Written on
The azure paper
Sung by you
Is powerful
To stop    
The blood-bath
I sink my quill
In the sun-pot
Copy
Those songs
And whisper
To the wind
To take them
Far and wide

Posted for Marian’s prompt Working On That @ Real Toads

16 comments:

  1. ohhh, love this. "dove-alphabet." gotta get that working. :) wonderful!

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  2. may these songs fill everyone with harmony and joy:)

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  3. This is such a beautiful extended metaphor. It gives me a feeling of peace and excitement and joy all at the same time. Love it!

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  4. I too love the dove- aphabets ~ May we hear those songs wherever we are ~ Good one Sumana ~

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  5. This is BEAUTIFUL. I love dipping your pen in the sun pot........

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  6. Beautiful.

    Thank you for visiting.

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  7. "sink my quill in the sun spot"… that is lovely! Write on!

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  8. Beautiful...dove-alphabet and sun-pot....I want to use both :)

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  9. Carrier pigeons, doves of peace and our quills in the sun-pot- Yes!

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  10. Like others, I love the words you've used, the phrases you've created. "quills in the sun-pot" is especially wonderful.
    K

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  11. This poem floats...

    Love this:

    "I sink my quill
    In the sun-pot
    Copy
    Those songs
    And whisper"

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  12. This is gorgeous! When I see white wings I will think of your poem-
    Wow~

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