Wednesday, 7 May 2014





                   LACE


                                 courtesy : google image


There is a mad rush
For possession of beauty
Passion flowers bloom
Intricate design in lace
Blind eyes on candle-lit face

Posted for Susie’s prompt 

Bits Of Inspiration ~ Lace

@ Real Toads


14 comments:

  1. interesting turn in that last line...i like the allusion of it toward lace as well...the possession of beauty is a scary thing...

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  2. This is beautiful and sad because of that last line... Isn't it strange how much you can learn from one prompt? Beautifully written!

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  3. Wonderful piece..it expresses the dark history of lace so profoundly in such few words. Thanks for writing!!

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  4. sometimes "beauty" isn't worth the price.

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  5. Those blind eyes are the heart-breaking reality.

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  6. I guess its like no pain , no gain

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  7. Reading your last line, it seems open to interpretation.
    However after reading Susie's wonderful dissertation one can readily see that there is a terrible price, loss of sight of the maker, that those ancients faced for having their lace.
    The sorry thing is that child labor as an expendable commodity abounds still in our world today.
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  8. That last line brings it all home - the cost of such items. Well done.

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  9. That last line is a powerful close ~ I now feel guilty for all those who have made such fine hand made lace ~

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  10. Blind eyes on candle-lit face....that says it all...bkm

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  11. This is gorgeous...both image and words!!

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  12. You are so GOOD! Crisp image and so much feeling.

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