any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Tee-hee, jing-a-lee, you made my day as I sashay away...
I sing song along with you ~ Very dadaist tanka, smiles !
haha...i love it..it made me smile....i think the sun blowing bunnies is my fav...ha
Smiled at your lovely dada poem!
Dadaist and so poetic at the same time! You did well, Sumana.
haha...that is fun...thanks for the smile..off for a match with the ants now...smiles
That 4th line made me smile.. love this one..
Excellent use of form, and bang on with the prompt. Like Brian, I zeroed in on the line /the snowy sun blew bunnies/ which innocently creates quite ribald imagery, & adds to the fun--having fun with this prompt was the order of the day.
Very fun and on point. You included sound, rhyme and, of course, a bit of disconnect. Thanks!
Perfect dada! One can really go many directions. Nicely Sumana!Hank
loved it..ants chasing football tooth..perfect sumana
Sassy lass sashayedTring ling bring dring sing song sing... is what I loved.
When pianos flee 'tis time for all to hunkera tuneless day, a carrotless bunnyclouds rise and stones clobberNice poem!
love that you did a tanka...now I'm not the only one who wrote Japanese style dada! :-)
Whoosh. Moving (pun intended).
:-) The images are delightful especially that of the snowy sun blowing dust bunnies. :-)
Well I liked best that fleeing piano-pianos are not often fleet of foot! Not like sassy lasses! K.
This poem sounds like bells. I love bells!
This is magical! I am tring to sell our old upright piano....maybe this can bring some luck in finding it a new home.
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