any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
How fresh and beautiful to read.
Now that is poetry. Beautifully described. Made me smile.
then night untying her long silken hair... what a beautiful image... love the guitar strumming as well and the dreamy feel of the moment
i like this, excellent images that open up the poem, nicely done
A song of silver night.. August is the month of moon for me.. Very appropriate
Untying her hair, a ritual but a sexy ritual if one is to observe. Wonderful write Sumana!Hank
This is beautifully realized in a single sentence.
Beautifully realised indeed - a pleasure of words.Anna :o]
nice. this builds really well...the soft night untying her hair was a line that particularly grabbed me....
This poem comes to such a crescendo of fulfillment.
What a beautiful image, Sumana. I love the idea of the silken hair....and the ending with the rise in the sky!
love the image of a lady with long, silken hair strumming her guitar...very pretty.
very arresting image you have created Suman:)
I can see and hear the notes rise...ZQ
Beautiful image portrayed... :-)
I like the poem. I want to hear that song.
An atmospheric feel to this poem, words, magical.....
Sumana this is lovely. It sounds like a beautiful refrain in a gentle song. I enjoyed it so much.
This is my favorite poem of yours - so beautiful with the shaman wind, the untying of the hair.....so beautiful!
Such serene, pristine picture of words and night moon
I like the image of the words rising in the sky after you have sung them.
Beautiful, succinct and vivid."I strumReleasing wordsThat glintWith dreamAnd rise in the sky" - My favourite lines.
so lovely and lyrical - love the shaman wind and the night untying her hair - beautiful - K
Mystical and very mysterious poem, but I like it.
In this poem, I believe it can. I believe you can play her tune in her person and setting. A great trust and care.
love how you set the image and the mood.
Love all the soft, shimmering words in this. Really beautiful writing, Sumana.
This moves beautifully.
ooh I like...beautifully done!
Gorgeous, delicate images.
Love your metaphors.
Lovely images so splendidly crafted, thanks for dropping by my blog, have a good weekMuch love...
Sumana, check your email..I wrote to you.
Wonderful words woven together like a fine tapestry.Thanks for coming by.
Lyrical, to say the least. A lovely piece.
'Releasing words That glint With dream And rise in the sky' Beautiful. You're writing speaks for itself! ;)
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