Thursday 16 October 2014

Supernovas

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Shiny green changes mind

Surely yellows and reds

Sudden burst of colors

Spells a catastrophe

Silence slowly descends

Supernovas in trees

 

 


Written for MTB & Vandana’s prompt Pleiades 

27 comments:

  1. It's wonderful to see the colors of the supernovas via the Hubble telescope...it boggles the mind...I like your S's in your Pleiades

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  2. Supernovae are such wonder.. And those patterns you can see in those images.

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  3. it's not really a catastrophe, it's just a big galactic change.

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  4. supernovas are amazing..loved it..

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  5. Different colours of the supernova. It shines bright illuminating the sky. A lovely response to the prompt.

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  6. A really Skillful and Sophisticated poem. Superb!

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  7. That supernova can give a sudden burst of colors ~ (I think you are missing one more line, smiles) ~

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  8. well that would be quite destructive to the trees...and implosion/explosion...unless of course it was of color...which this season is all about here....

    grace is right, it is 7 lines for the 7 sisters..but that is fine...

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  9. This is very colorful! I love it!

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  10. autumn is the supernova of the trees - yes, that works for me

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  11. liked the use of trees in the end... nice

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  12. It's wonderful these can be seen with all their splendor via NASA & Hubble. Nice.

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  13. Everything in your poem speaks of sudden change, huge change, in full color. We have lived through this before, but will we again?

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  14. I like the feeling of this intense flame descending...powerful.

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  15. This is a poem I can SEE, Sumana! Lovely.

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  16. I like the vivid nature of this poem. Well done.

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  17. I love color and was so glad to see how very appropriately you used that as a focus in this!

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  18. I like this form, very much, and you've penned a "shining" example of Pleiades, here.

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  19. This is clever......plus it would also work for Susan's prompt: Trees!

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  20. Supernovas in trees

    Strange they have similarities to ordinary elements on earth. Wonderful lines Sumana!

    Hank

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  21. Absolutely breathtaking to imagine, all of those colors morphing together. Nice take on the prompt!

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  22. Love all these colors emerging in your poem with the picture reflecting burst!. ~ Wonderful on the prompt!

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  23. Your poem is as colorful as its inspiration. :-)

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  24. My take from your poem is that Autumn induces mini-supernovas in the leaves of trees all over the planet; nice job.

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