Monday, 17 November 2014

Cold

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Fragrant dawn

With sweet date palm juice


Come winter

Posted for Haiku Horizons prompt ~ Cold 

8 comments:

  1. Is that an invitation for winter to come? Or is it just a statement of fact?

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  2. slurp slurp....nalen gur (I love Palm jaggery...) Beautiful...

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  3. Fragrant dawn (sigh) lovely and evocative.

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  4. Oh, I think in those circumstances I would want winter to stay far away!

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  5. I like the palm juice but not winter, its bitterly cold here ~

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  6. Love the line sweet date palm juice" - very creative

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  7. I could smell this haiku. Delightful.

    PS:I've been trying on and off for days (again over the months since I got back to the USA) to find a way to get a comment from wordpress to blogger. This capacity seems to be intermittent and vanishing. So I opened an ancient and unused blogger account to use for commenting on blogger accounts. But, alas, it doesn't link to me or my blog.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/11/22/cold-honey/

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