any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Silence is killing at times. Void is what we wanna avoid :)
all that is broken can be put back together...patience & time....it is so good to see you...i am very sorry...but it is good to see you...smiles.
Such a silence is piercing deep ~ Nice to see you Sumana ~ I hope you are well ~
nice!!!have a good Wednesdaymuch love...
(Sorry, Sumana....some people just don't see...)
Welcoming you back, Sumana. Your poem is a deep and heartfelt expression of sorrow. I do understand! "Oozing void" says it all.
Very powerful images, Sumana. I hope that with time the piercing pain lessens.
Wonderful. powerful heart breaking words.
I am so happy to see you and read your poetry again! I feel the pain in the shatter, in the oozing, in the void. Thank you.
I can feel the pain in this beautiful poem, when "all words are shattered". I am so sorry. I also see the strength in being able to write these short lines. Sometimes we "write our way through" and it helps somewhat. The image you chose is very beautiful. Take care, Sumana. It is good to see you.
Hello Sumana, welcome back, but as I can guess there has been some mishappening at your end, sorry for that.May the poetry give you strength.
These powerful lines are almost as piercing as the pain they describe! All words shattered ... and yet, what have we but our words in times of pain? Inadequate as they sometimes feel, still I always think, 'What on earth do people do who aren't poets?' I sometimes forget (until told!) that my words forged in pain may offer something of value to others besides myself. You are a beautiful poet, Sumana, and have the ability to touch hearts, as these words touch mine.
Shattered...a strong word and visual!
Sumana you have conveyed so much with so few words. Heartbreaking. So good to have you back again.
Nice brevity. Love it in fact.
Nice to see you writing again Sumana. I feel your pain in the lines you wrote. Hope you are okay.
All words shattered. To be left with a void like that when one usually has the words… I hope you can find a way back, expressing grief, heartache is often a way out. I wish you strength and healing.
wow thats a nice haiku there! intense!
Sumana,I feel the deep pain and the hirt, held in the silence...Impacting..Eileen
A powerful image.
A brilliant and a powerful piece! Loved it..
ah..sumana..the pain is oozing in every word dear..i do hope that you will find that strength inside...
I love 'My heart oozing void'... says it all...
You say so much with so few words...Brevity is wit, you prove it once more !!!
Sumana this is a beautiful and heartfelt. You have painted the pain of silence to the heart perfectly here!
so nice with so few words
Shattered words falling into the silent void of an empty heart. Strong and simple, Sumana!
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your valuable thoughts.........