any picture comes to my mind, i try to give it a body of words, love to sit on other blooms, for honey, color, fragrance........
Whew, what a powerful statement this poem makes. This is is SO true, Sumana.
Indeed! Powerfully written! It sounds like a cycle of nothing but death in exchange for love, but we each must be willing to take up that cross too for change to occur. Our own cross, not His. Bless you, Sumana..
A bold a determined poem..from your words alone..i believe!
His only fault beingLoving themTeaching them... An inspiring choice, Sumana. If only his message will finally be heeded.
That is humankind, for sure, making him a god after the deed is done. Beautiful choice for a phenomenal man, Sumana.
Some people are flowing ganges of love.
So well done Sumana. Thank you.Anna :o]
Strange are the ways of man!!
loved the line ..making him a god after the deed is done..very powerful.. sumana well said..
Expression that is so true...powerful and naked, Bravo!
yes, powerful depiction, sumanagracias
We must give gratitude to all our teachers while they're still alive ~ powerful statement in your poem!
Powerful writing, Sumana and important message.
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your valuable thoughts.........
Whew, what a powerful statement this poem makes. This is is SO true, Sumana.
ReplyDeleteIndeed! Powerfully written! It sounds like a cycle of nothing but death in exchange for love, but we each must be willing to take up that cross too for change to occur. Our own cross, not His. Bless you, Sumana..
ReplyDeleteA bold a determined poem..from your words alone..i believe!
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Teaching them... An inspiring choice, Sumana. If only his message will finally be heeded.
That is humankind, for sure, making him a god after the deed is done. Beautiful choice for a phenomenal man, Sumana.
ReplyDeleteSome people are flowing ganges of love.
ReplyDeleteSo well done Sumana. Thank you.
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Strange are the ways of man!!
ReplyDeleteloved the line ..making him a god after the deed is done..very powerful.. sumana well said..
ReplyDeleteExpression that is so true...powerful and naked, Bravo!
ReplyDeleteyes, powerful depiction, sumana
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We must give gratitude to all our teachers while they're still alive ~ powerful statement in your poem!
ReplyDeletePowerful writing, Sumana and important message.
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