any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Sumana, this is the most beautiful poem ever. The image is perfect too. It is true, pain might be the single greatest source of enlightenment.....it hones and hollows us, until we shine. I especially love "each drop of tears turns into light." Exactly.
Bless you, dear Sumana. You put great emotions and learnings into small spaces by scooping to hang like laundry, saetting aside to dry like a clay pot ... and here I too find light, here I too become whole. This form allows a salve "to form." Thank you!
Very cool that Sherry and I both posted at exactly 12:24! I'm saving your poem in my file of poems I don't want to live without.
My gosh! Such beautiful lines... so many colorful emotions expressed very beautifully :DAgreed with Susan.. this is one memorable poem!! :Dxoxo
So beautiful and true Sumana. I hope the Sun drenches your soul to infinity and that you are happy now.
i see you lingering in that light
Sumana,Positivity oozes from this poem. A pure delight to read and absorb...Eileen
What more can I add? This is shimmery and golden.
That innermost sense within us tells us that with the sun all things are possible as it is not only the generator of our lives but the motivator for all that we can do.
Beautiful and poignant - it is such a moving piece, yet soothing to the soul.
I really liked this. Poignant and almost ethereal. A wonderful creation.
Lovely in concept and execution.
Flows very very beautifully , enchanting!!
Beautiful simply beautiful.
We must hold onto the sun..keep it close and let it shine - beautiful and illuminating
You are definitely a poet's delight, Sumana! :))))) The poem is emotionally rich..and as it progresses, the thought does not merely "rise" but orbits away from the dark. Life is symbolized with a battle which means we have to do something to keep us alive. Great piece...:)
'I scoop the sun's is such a rich refrain!
I like the idea to fix the soul with light from sun...Lovingly! x
Such nourishment for the soul. Beautiful.Poppy
Reminded me of the water that perenially trickles drop by drop on the Shivling.Beautiful!
This read like a prayer ! Such a lovely triolet Sumana ~
The is a warming chant sprinkled with light and darkness... lovely.
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your valuable thoughts.........