any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Oh, I hope that those dark waves WILL stop crashing about & that all will be calm soon once again. I do wonder sometimes if those crashing waves we sometimes experience point us in the direction of the True Peace we can find inside ourselves.
It is so important to see the ones we loved all around us, in the clouds, the trees, in the flowing water and in birdsong; always reminding us they are not that far away.
How I love the journey here from threatening to receptive to participatory to consuming! I would like to stay in the skipping stone and silent witness part for a long time. The inner life is as vast as an entire world!
Wow! Sheer devotion!
I expect as your love will remain so will the sadness of those waves..however i hope that there is comfort in remembering..of finding the smalls grain of sand..better still a stone..to stay connected to the ones we love and miss..a fine piece to open your Motif prompt
Wow.. beautifully written.
This is so beautiful... loved this intense & emotive piece.. :DLots of lovexoxo
love is hidden deeply inside the sea and comes up with the mighty waves of emotions.
Praying. May those mighty waves stop spilling one into another, full or fluid, guided by God. Amen.Beautifully penned, Sumana.
I love that "huge tsunami of Thy Love"....so beautiful, Sumana. It makes my heart leap.
I love your contrast of the Tsunami force (that is frightening) to the lapping ripple (tat calms).Those waves that come so unawares are unsettling.My prayers for the calm waves to soothe and thank you for hosting.
so much love can only make you more beautifulhave a nice Wednesdaymuch love...
LOVE the idea of playing skipping stones with the "pebble of thy name." Fantastic.
Just the whisper of some people's name can cause huge storms...
I specially like this part:Till a huge tsunamiOf Thy LoveSwallows me upHappy to see you as part of the team Sumana ~
Sumana,Such majestic power is invoked within your poem; the draw and the fear. Then a contrast, when everything settles into that placid lull..Love can behave in much the same manner, for some people!!
Till a huge tsunamiOf Thy LoveSwallows me upForever.......................... wonderful.
A beautiful and heartfelt prayer! May it indeed be so.
It doe resemble a prayer with a great trust in God's love !
Magnificent images were born in your waves...I like "Swirling up higher and higherTill a huge tsunamiOf Thy Love" ~ Eternal wave of Love! ~ beautiful
This is a beatiful prayer Sumana. I hope this ccmes true for you and that healing does swallow you up.
Feelings and words have been wonderfully grafted....the swirling tsunami may embrace us all for the eternal tranquility....
Wonderful prompt Sumana and a lovely write a well. I do hope the dark waves subside.
Great poem, liked the way you used your prompt.
Play with the pebble of your name - I absolutely love that line, there is so much you can read into it. You can really feel the build in this as well.
" I will play with the pebble Of Thy Name" - such an evocative line.
This describes so well a situation where a soul in torment feels so powerless in the face of the raging storm and crashing waves of existence, Sumana. The appeal to the Deity, and hope of finding shelter in His love is what makes the poem so beautiful.
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your valuable thoughts.........