Saturday, 13 June 2015
Trust
I trust my sun who will always rise
I trust my stars who won’t forget to light
I trust my Ganga* who will ever purify
And my Himalayas who will pull me to His
height
My soul has taken bath in fire yet not burnt
My soul has withstood fear-storm undaunted
Waves of doubt could never blow out Thy name
The trust in Thou glows in my soul like a
flame
Be my storm, fire, deluge whatever Thou Will
With faith, trust, love let my heart be filled
*Ganga is the Ganges
Posted for A Prompt Each day / Daily Dose of Inspiration – Trust - is today’s word to
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There's a majesty in these beautiful, impassioned words.
ReplyDeleteWhat strength and trust is in this poem Sumana.
ReplyDeleteTrust is such a difficult to define. It requires loyalty and submissiveness. I thoroughly enjoyed the sentiments here, Sumana ad each line doesn't show any condition which could alter the meaning of trust
ReplyDeleteSo much easier to put your trust in the might of nature than to the fickleness of human hearts..
ReplyDeleteWith faith, trust, love let my heart be filled
ReplyDeleteIf blessed with the 3 elements one can never go wrong! Heart-felt feelings extended then can be most real and sincere! Great lines Sumana!
Hank
Letting go and accepting the world as it is requires a leap of faith..an ultimate trust..not easy and very admirable to achieve..another honest and beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteBe my storm, fire, deluge whatever Thou Will
ReplyDeleteWith faith, trust, love let my heart be filled.
Loved the closing lines.. It is as difficult to gain trust as easy it is to lose it. Well penned..!
Lots of love,
Sanaa
A strong prayer of faith ~ I specially admire the ending couplet ~
ReplyDeleteHave a good weekend Sumana ~
a most comforting poem!
ReplyDelete"My soul has taken bath in fire yet not burnt" -- What a powerful statement this is, Sumana.
ReplyDeleteReally hard to keep faith when all goes well in life, but much more difficult to keep the faith when difficult times abound! Your words express a strong faith.
To trust and then Trust with full heart--oohh--this is a good prayer--I will keep it to go beyond surfaces and into the vastness beyond all.
ReplyDeleteTo read of trust so profound and pure is a delight
ReplyDeleteyou have definitely set your trust to unshakable means
ReplyDeletehave a lovely Sunday; i'm happy you dropped in at my Sunday Lime
much love...
Like this prompt inspired poem, esp. second verse 'My soul has taken bath in fire yet not burnt' ...
ReplyDeleteYou made the prompt a wonderful springboard for this piece.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Such a beautiful poem of faith, Sumana. You inspire me! I found the same line as Mary so powerful. "I have taken bath in fire and not burnt."
ReplyDeleteMy soul has taken bath in fire yet not burnt.....so beautiful lines
ReplyDeleteTrusting the river, the mountains...and surely our god.
ReplyDeleteBest things to put your trust into.
A song, a prayer, gratitude all wrapped in your words....indeed trust is one of the most difficult things we can do, but one of the essential ones.
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
What a delight to read, Sumana, yes this poem that's oozing with positive vibe. Thank you for the poem!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful evocation of the power of faith. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteOh, very nice, Sumana!! I feel the strength in your words :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful wish!
ReplyDeleteWhat a coincidence I was just thinking about trust and how much its important in life. Nice take!
ReplyDeleteLovely Piece!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the first stanza.
ReplyDeleteYou bring out the magic in trusting :) Lovely.
ReplyDeleteIt's wonderful to know that you are never alone or without support.
ReplyDeleteWhat a faith-full poem. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteI trust your faith, and mine too! This is gorgeous!
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