any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Sumana, You have used all the words beautifully'I specially liked the usage of the word 'paradise'
Each and every line is beautiful and hold such wise words for all of us, I especially like the kite......................it wants to soar high but is controlled by a finger!! great write up!!
Indeed -- anywhere there are books it is paradise!Love the one about the kite - very metaphoric - as we all, in some way, wish a 'higher sky.'Ha, the sweethearts may not name the day until much later!
Nice. I read each stanza as a separate little koan. That last one is so true. The tycoon one caught me up as well. We need business men of conciousness and humility. Perhaps then they could use that influence to make a turn at what is happening to our world.
Read separately or together, each part compliments the next. Brilliant writing.
Very lovely--touching thought that the planet needs well-wishers, Yes.
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